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"Planet Love"
A rhythmicsoul and Shabba Collaboration


  Shabba:

The spaceship is ready for departure
I have said my goodbyes
Let go of all that weighs me down
Ready for my journey into outerspace
To another world in the UNIVERSE

Wow, I'm leaving EARTH(finally)
A world I've known my whole life
To journey to a place
No man or woman has ever gone before
I wanna be the first to walk on Planet LOVE

  rhythmicsoul:

The Cockpit is filled with anticipation
Land of love and peace as our destination
I close my eyes and envision this enchanted place
The milkyway passes and I anticipate
With no regrets, This Loveland is now what I chase

Behind me is earth, ahead is life
Yet toward i go to a place that is unfamiliar
My home is in the rearview
Yet my heart is ahead in clear view
I now roam a place a new, Planet LOVE

  Shabba:

This planet does NOT show on the radar screen
Its a place often felt before it can be seen
The excitement
The thrill
As we blast off to a place only found in dreams

A planet called LOVE
Saying I LOVE U is an everyday thing
No need to be ashamed
Of who u are
No such thing as pain( on a planet where LOVE IS KING)

  rhythmicsoul:

A feeling, not a view, gives the first impression
the feeling is greater than any worldy possession
Sky so beautiful and new
Hills as high as the expectation of trust
Seas so deep to drown out the power of lust

Beauty embodies the very existence
Surrounding u in joy and light with a great persistence
A reflection of life gives hope
Emotion and LOVE is needed to Thrive
Both will become reason enough to stay Alive

  Shabba:

A world all its on
A parallel Universe
A world were love is way of life
Not just a state of mind
Not just words spoken

There are no wars
There is only peace
HATE AND ANGER earthly emotions (left behind)
Joy and Happiness easy to find
On a planet called LOVE
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Date Submitted: Feb 17, 2008 (10:17 PM)
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  SloFade
04/01/08 (04:33 AM) 
I'm just now learnin' that this place, infact...does exist. The imagry was beautiful and got warmer with each stanza. "Seas so deep to drown out the power of lust" Had me stuck for a minute...You made ur own tiny world and took natural occurences and turned them into emotions...enough said :)

  piss a mofo of...
02/27/08 (03:59 PM) 
Two Poets on a journey to a "planet called LOVE"...let me know how that martian trim is shit i'll be on the next flight!!! lol...this was a spectacular scribe!!! nothin short of that!!!! now i'll be waitin on the next scribe from you two...ctfu @ Brutha T!!! always pluggin his joints!! hahahahah..Excellence in Ink spilled across this page!

  nito pio
02/18/08 (02:26 PM) 
this is really cool how u guys did the whole collabo. i like it.

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