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"Plastic Love"
  by Tiku


Heart runs wild
Breathings become fast
Flowers are exchanged
Till the meetings last;

Eyes look inebriated
As fingers touch hands
Those who object
Are ceased to be friends

Body feels heavy
With fancy shoes and dresses
Powered face glistens
Around coloured eye-lashes;

A few sessions
Of making fun in the bed;
A brief period of separation
And they go mad:

The sweat smell bad
As nights of passion shrink;
They feel that the potion of love
They can no more drink;
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Date Submitted: Oct 16, 2009 (10:43 AM)
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comment icon  COMMENTS (11)
  Lil Ms Cherry
11/16/09 (12:41 PM) 
wow nice i like the part "they feel that the potion of love they can no more drink

  *Lips*
11/14/09 (02:19 PM) 
I love the word play in this, very well done. keep up the good writing!

  $yung moe
11/13/09 (10:28 PM) 
i love it. good work.

  Nino
11/09/09 (09:14 AM) 
O WoWWWW!!!! tHiS PoEm BaNgZZZ!!! i LoVe iT!!!:)

  sujetta
11/07/09 (10:13 PM) 
wow.:) this is powerful stuff.lol. taken notes

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