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"playback"
  by Lique


the songs u play for me to take heed...
they speak to four ears not two
almost pointless to speak--
if the change is a visual
it will be from four lines not two.
I'm not the only one lacking baby,
crawl inside your own skin!
better yet, slide into mine,
breathe from my lungs,
feel with MY soul
kiss you with every ounce of more than I have to give
look at you with MY eyes,
and conquer every stare with the patience of a soldier
knowing your embrace won't be returned
feel YOUR rejections
hear the "not right now baby"s
soak in the never-ending requests with no intention of reciprocating favors
experience the constant dismissals of sweet, simple desires
and try to warm the chill when you turn away
oh...one last thing...take this sleeve and wipe my eyes-every time you leave
me standing empty and outside of everything real to you
understand I will be waiting and it will never cease...but in the meantime, baby, FEEL what I feel when you leave this one-way


NEYO - MAKE IT WORK - NEYO

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Date Submitted: Nov 24, 2008 (10:04 PM)
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  getchamndrite
01/01/09 (10:40 PM) 
woooow..k heres a fav to me. been in that place a few times myself..and the song *sigh* damn damn damn..very nice

  mikeb30
12/29/08 (07:09 PM) 
Damn... the music chosen only enhances all the content w/n this write...sincere emotions @ their best...

  g00n
12/26/08 (12:49 AM) 
strong feelings strong write.. music was a great add and worked well with the poem, i loved it keep burning parchment

  *~Raw Sensuali...
12/25/08 (10:52 PM) 
Damn...this has that "If I were a boy" feel to it... LOVE IT... I've been there...wishing he could feel the way he hurts me somehow... a definite fave.

  touchdapearl2
12/25/08 (09:49 PM) 
this was a moving piece! the flow of the piece laid to a smooth read with deep thought! and the song was on point

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