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"played"
  by princessnikki


everyday i try and look on the bright side,
and relise ive been takan for a mutha-fukin ride
eversince my mum left
ive been depressed, got me smokin cess
and now she tryna make me change my address
and boy noweven you doin me wrong
got me tokein on this fuckin bong
i new you was a player rite from the start
but i never new youd break my heart
why couldnt you jus play your part
but everyday i would pray that you would stay
i new you neverwanted me
and now i think its my time to set you free
you made me sit and wounder, who would give a fuck if they lost me
must have been blind to let you in my life
tellin my friends ive found mr right
eversince that 1st day i met you
ive been feelin blue
use to tell me what you thought i wanted to hear,
i new you could feel my fear
you made me cry
felt like i wanted to die
all you wanted to do was play a game
alli wanted was for you to change
use to tell me baby its gunna be ok
use to believe everything you say
not anymore coz im leavin
cant stick around no more
youve lft my heart feelin sore
had me drunk on your love, but im finnaly feelin sobar
so let me tell you summin...baby its over!
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Date Submitted: Aug 17, 2007 (05:44 PM)
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  love2me?
10/04/07 (06:37 PM) 
damn !!! girl i fill you keep letting emotions out it lets me know that i am not the only one that goes threw shit

  lonewolf
09/26/07 (08:13 AM) 
you r a great poem writer thas fasho tenstarz and those r words im scared of the it's over i don't want that to happen to me

  Will charles
08/19/07 (04:23 PM) 
A lot of emotional depth, straight from the heart. You are a very talented poet. 10 starz

  tngrl
08/18/07 (07:17 PM) 
i agree with williesidney... i would much rather read a poem that i can feel, rather than one filled with 'big' words and no substance... i can totally relate to this poem and enjoyed reading it. ten starz... keep up the great work and welcome to GS

  NUPE_Squad
08/18/07 (10:16 AM) 
i've read all your poems, but this one was by far the best one to me. keep on writin

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