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"PLEASE WRITE SOME SHIT i CAN READ PART3"
  by SLICK50


why must poetry suffer
because fake poet's want become real poet's
but half of the people who write have no flow
and lack creativity and leaves a lot to imagination
that leave many uninspired
I grow tried of reading half ass pomes
that don't any deserve of my attention
it's a shame that all you have to do is come up with a creative
poem name to gain fame
but who to blame for giving these fake poet's fame
the people who give the praises on half ass poetry
that is starting to bore me
because fake ass poet's want to become real poet's
but lack something that called skill and emotion
and a little time and devotion
if half of the poets take the time and think
instead of watching bet
then it might be some shit
that could feed the mind of the youth
instead of the fake ass gangsters wannabe's
who think they deserve there time in the booth
but you can't be a rapper if you can't write poetry
because you still need to gain a skill called a flow
but I bet you didn't know
because your to busy trying to put up a show
with fancy word play to cover up the fact
that you have no flow
so let it go so the real poet's can have they shine
and the fake ones just sit back and recline
so I can ease your mind
with wordplay alone something your tried to clone
but some where you went wrong
talking fake shit as if it was real shit
but it was just something you heard
and not something you lived
all I ask is write what you feel
and keep it real
but you still don't feel what I telling you
to my sisters and brothers
I plead please write some shit I can read



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Date Submitted: Nov 13, 2007 (01:50 PM)
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  dirtyRed
12/05/08 (07:10 PM) 
i feel ya on that. there's a lot of shit on this site i can't follow. i'm not knocking anyone's game but some of it, I JUST CAN'T READ! you spoke your nind on this piece.....and mind well spoken!

  DOMINICANPOET
06/26/08 (01:47 AM) 
damn son this was hott love this shit no doubt keep em comin ten from me

  Nilla
06/20/08 (07:50 AM) 
although i thorougly agree with the message you're trying to get across , this felt kind a repetitive. *shrugs*

  Red Dragon
06/20/08 (05:46 AM) 
this some truth shit right here. And you spoke facts I didn't even think about before around the middle. This great

  Soul Lyrikal
06/02/08 (02:17 PM) 
I feel you on this!!! I could feel your disgust as I read....Hot! I wrote 'peace' or two similar in tone.

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