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"PLEASURE 1ST"
  by Eryn
  - This Poem is a response to the poem affair or straight pleasure? by Tavious


COULD IT BE THIS MAN IZ FALLIN FOR ME OR AM I FALLIN FOR HIM?
OR IZ HIZ HEAD GAME SO GOOD IM LOSIN ALL COMMON SENSE.
SLOWLY BUT SURELY LORIN ME IN TO HIS MIND AS HE READZ MY LIPS WIT HIS...
ONLI 2 FIND IM SPEECHLESS I CANT SEEM TO GET A GRIP ON THIS FEELING
MY HIPZ CANT STOP GRINDING AZ HIZ MEMBER MEETZ MA ENTRANCE IN A MATTER OF SECONDS
IM LOST IN OUR MOTION.... CAUGHT UP IN COMPLETE PLEASURE AZ THA PAIN BECOMEZ LESSER WITH U PLEASIN ME WHILE U STRETCHIN...
IF MA WALLZ COULD TALK THEY'D BE SCREAMIN THANK U FOR THIS BLESSIN!
YET IM LOSING MY ENGLISH AZ MY SPEECH FORMS WORDZ U CAN HARDLY UNDERSTAND
DAMN IF HE WAS MA MAN I COULD GET THIS EVERY NITE N DAY
BUT ONLI FOR A MOMENT IM THA GURL U STICKIN AND MOVIN MAKIN ME THINK THERE'Z A POINT U SHOULD BE PROVIN
UNDERSTAND PLEASURE IZ OUR ONLI GOAL HERE U PLEASIN ME AND VICE VERSA. I ENJOY'D MA MOMENT OF TEMPORARY INSANITY BUT NOW NOW U KNOW THAT PLEASURE COMEZ 1ST
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Date Submitted: Dec 02, 2007 (12:32 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 01/18/08 (04:22 PM)
Author: stlpimpin27
Poem Title: IT WAS A LIFETIME DE...

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comment icon  COMMENTS (14)
  Bum Bum
03/07/08 (03:26 PM) 
yo i like dis poem. u should write more parts

  princessB
03/07/08 (01:33 AM) 
hot flow! once again you brought your A-game and came with the realness. keep it up

  The Mad Poet
02/20/08 (02:31 AM) 
Very hot piece I love da way u flowed ma!! The concept was brilliantly written!! Keep blessing us with pieces like this ma!! 10 stars

  stlpimpin27
01/18/08 (03:49 PM) 
I MIGHT B BETTA THAN U IN THE LOL GAME BUT U GOT THE POEM GAME ON LOCK!!!

  NINO
12/22/07 (05:13 AM) 
WOW! I really loved the flow of this whole write...you really did ya thang on dis one. "...losing my english...", absolutely krazy line right there, loved it. Nice work you did, ma. Gotta give ya 10 starz out the gate

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