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"Pleasure After Work"
A BLAKK ROSE and envee Collaboration


  B. Rose:

Work was exhausting, but im glad im at the crib/
dimmed room, with candles and ensense/
as tired as I am... im still diggin this/
beckuz is exactly what i want to see before my "Welcome bakk home kiss"/
drop my briefcase, loosen my work shirt up
take off the tie, let my shirt free as its untucked/
Rose petals on the stairs leading the way/
to the bedroom, but i have to pea unfortunetly/
so I take a detour to the facilities/
as Im on the toilet sitting, i wonder what my girl is thinkin....

  envee:

as i here the door open and close
my mind switches my body into freak mode
i can smell his precence that smooth aroma intisifies my heart beat nipples istantly erect
got me grippin the sheets
with the highten in the heat i squrim with anticipation
i can feel his lips upon my neck
tongue dancing along every inch of my body sending chills to my center
feeling inhanced become so realistic that my hand begans to creep towards the sticky flavor that has begun to tricle down my thighs
as i suckle my fingers
i close my eyes
i wait
wait
knowing what he likes
i ponder what creamy creations flavor ill be tastin tonight

  B. Rose:

I took her fingers put them in my mouth lick off sexi flavors/
she got from in between her legs, and i savor/
them as if it were my favorite ice cream/
but want more cream, so i wedge my head in between/
release my tongue inside her peach/
making sure i caress that spot that begins with a "G"/
long enough to for her to squirt like the carbonated citrus drink/
while yelling my name louder than Mariah Carey sings/
Im an MC, I Master the Control of what Makes Children/
So let Make you Cum, with Major Consistance/

So I let her take control, she gets on top/
Starts grinding, feeling like she gonna blow her top/
thats ironic ckuz she hasnt even took off her top/
and I wanna suck on those tities, lick her nipples like a lollipop/
but instead she tells me to stop and leads me to the wall/
goes down gives me head, my legs weak but i cant fall/
she wants me to cum, she not dumb at all/
she wants to taste the juice... and swallow it all

  envee:

strawberry banana cream exploads
got me seein different scenes
as the cream hits the back of my throat
my hands continue to stroke
even after a creamy creation
he becomes erect waitin
awaitin
no more patience
he grabs me pushes me on the bed
as my gates open his for the taken
he enters long thick and strong fittin right in place
deep wet and tight brings the emotions to his face
with every stroke i hear the juicyness of my necter between my legs
the sound of his pipe
got me purring scratchin his back for dear life
flip the script grip my hips and begans to hit it from the back
causing so much damage, heavy breathing i think im having a heartattack
but with all the rough tension and actions im throiwn it back
and from the way he moanin i can tell he lovin dat
I release my breast and he devours them like a ripe cherry
twirling his tongue upon my nipple then suckling each in with care
adding an iginiting flame ingulfed in a flare



now let me take my place at the head of the throne
as i hope on top and grind to my own poem
letting every syllable enter the pit of my tummy
bouncing like a tigger im on my own suggar pill
as i grind my hips i feel his sensation rising like honey
as i climb higher and higher i began to get a chill


LONG STRONG DEEP ROUGH TIGHT FASTER SLOWER MORE
MORE

i release like a super soaker but its the least bit over
this is no where near the end as the tick tock of the clock begins
the morning wakes me yearning for a taste
im ready to get it in right before he goes to work
lips wet got my tongue on the tip
rise and shine
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Date Submitted: Aug 12, 2007 (04:52 PM)
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  Mani
08/19/07 (08:07 PM) 
Dayum this was crazy! I liked tha collabo, yall was really good and overall it was real sexy...after a night like that i'd be too tired to go back the next mornin..lol

  jaszzy pooh
08/17/07 (03:02 PM) 
wow...impressive...yall did the damn thang...ol freaky asses...but on the real this was hot make me wanna go back home to my baby right now ond do what i do....lol....yall work well together and i love the rawness of this the way everything was so elaborate and everything...this was hot...keep it up....i say 10

  *Chi*Chi*Chick...
08/16/07 (06:45 PM) 
this was a long poem but yall kept pulling me in nice write you did yo thang hot write

  envee
08/14/07 (04:15 PM) 
i c i write is hot!!! tyhanx for the love everybody i been waitin for this collab forever now that i got it im happy with the outcome lol it get no betta thank you blakk babe ur still my idol

  Lyrical Soul W...
08/14/07 (04:02 PM) 
man i be needing me a woman like this my nigga ooohhhhh i'm so so jealous of you right now lol loved it u blazed and ten i got to post it

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