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COMMENTER |
POEM |
COMMENT DATE |
COMMENT |
| 1 |
rhymeslikedimes |
LOVE WINE |
10/06/08 (06:32 PM) |
wow. omg. this is beautiful. |
| 2 |
Peshi |
If the Dead Could Speak |
10/06/08 (06:31 PM) |
dis is deep...i kno alot of people are touched by this one. good write. i give u 10 starzzzzz babi. -one- PESHI |
| 3 |
pozeup |
Wall Flower |
10/06/08 (06:29 PM) |
I am feeling this one, very touching and you wrote it well. The flow was neat and word play was nice. I shall await for you to post more writes.. Good job. |
| 4 |
Bestever |
This pussy all for you |
10/06/08 (06:28 PM) |
well, whoever the lucky guy is, I hope hes pushin that love in the right direction:) I love the write mz april:) |
| 5 |
Syndel |
Can You Put Out This Fire? |
10/06/08 (06:25 PM) |
where the hell is my erotic partner I want a erotic collab * pouting * okay this flavorlishas an tasty too |
| 6 |
angeleyes1 |
A Writer's Wish |
10/06/08 (06:23 PM) |
very nicely said yes I think we all want that keep flowing with your words much love diva |
| 7 |
Syndel |
LOOKING BACK ON OLD RULES OF ENGAGEMENT |
10/06/08 (06:22 PM) |
I have to agree with you there I have always told my sons call i double dog dare you cause I will find where they take your ass and whip you for making me look for you such a true write lovin it |
| 8 |
MAVRICK |
My Crazy Ass Jamacian |
10/06/08 (06:21 PM) |
hahah...u crazy MzSpoon! A carribean dream turned into an itty bitty nightmare...hahaha |
| 9 |
RUBY RED DBL R |
Can I Miss You? |
10/06/08 (06:20 PM) |
*rolls eyes* get on bk train, the path train, the light rail, and the immie and come see me, you know i live right across the water lol....... very nice scribe.... love the song you used too |
| 10 |
angeleyes1 |
I remember Dying... |
10/06/08 (06:20 PM) |
very good write I see you letting it all out keep flowing with your words much love diva |
| 11 |
pozeup |
His Eye Is On The Sparrow |
10/06/08 (06:18 PM) |
This is touching . Very nice write, and the song topped it off. I love Lauryn Hill and her soulful voice... 10 stars/ |
| 12 |
RUBY RED DBL R |
...It's Over, It's Really Over... |
10/06/08 (06:18 PM) |
*faints* wtf????? loving it so deep, wow, love the metaphors-------s I played with it
Laid with it
Humped, dumped, and then attempted to trade it
Back in
And keep my old pen
Thinking he never ever know it ----- masterpiece |
| 13 |
mz_April |
!SDRAWKCAB |
10/06/08 (06:18 PM) |
it took me a min to find a mirror. i really feel you on this write thought really well put 10 starzz |
| 14 |
MAVRICK |
Sin and Redemption |
10/06/08 (06:15 PM) |
This is exactly what soul-less shape shifters do, they stick close to you disguising themselves as friends or companions, to keep you under a constant bombardment of confusion and pain. Thanks for sharing this revelation of wicked manifestations in so-called human form. |
| 15 |
pozeup |
Motorcycle Ridin' |
10/06/08 (06:15 PM) |
DANG !!!!!! Both of yall ripped this concept in half ! .. I am loving this to the fullest. It wasn't hard for me to visualize this. Flow was nice. Dang got me wanting to actually do it like this. The rain gave it that special touch to it. This is a HOT STEAMY WRITE. Good job both of you... 10 stars. |
| 16 |
Young Street Poet |
Pussy Calls (EROTIC) |
10/06/08 (06:15 PM) |
don't start this again bae....lol |
| 17 |
Young Street Poet |
Rest Denied |
10/06/08 (06:14 PM) |
nice haiku |
| 18 |
RUBY RED DBL R |
Fucking Love |
10/06/08 (06:14 PM) |
i love the song lol remind me of an old dirty bar on ralph ave i used to go to......... i totaly agree with the poem, i get it!!!! finally you speaking my language...... |
| 19 |
piss a mofo off |
Good Evening. |
10/06/08 (06:14 PM) |
*sangin*...'someone's gonna have to teach you a lesson....someone's gonna have to straighten you out.."....i'm with all that action!!!..this is a hott write, Candice!!! now lemme go smoke this blunt and reminisce on the ep!...hahahahha |
| 20 |
Young Street Poet |
No Real Rest |
10/06/08 (06:14 PM) |
.............nice...i like this...i feel like i can't ever sleep...wait i told you that already...lol |
| 21 |
King Sa'Ra |
No Control |
10/06/08 (06:11 PM) |
Deep very deep. |
| 22 |
King Sa'Ra |
Life's A Bitch |
10/06/08 (06:09 PM) |
This is a very deep write I love this one good poem this 1 get 10 stars. check out some of my work. |
| 23 |
Dawn |
NO IV FOR THESE VEINS |
10/06/08 (06:08 PM) |
I was so blown away by this poem..it speaks truth..it was an original..a true write..I am giving this a big 100. Find piece within your son...find piece within yourself and know that there is one sista on GS who stands beside you..keep walking sista. |
| 24 |
stayfocus3d |
?????????TELL ME WHY I STAY ????????? |
10/06/08 (06:07 PM) |
u shud leave if shyt is lik that...but good write...really brought out ur emotions |
| 25 |
PoeticYungn |
NO IV FOR THESE VEINS |
10/06/08 (06:07 PM) |
wow...this touched my soul...and the picture had me really feeling this entire poem....I must say you are a wonderful writer...and I feel where you are coming from.....wow... |
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