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COMMENT DATE |
POET |
POEM |
COMMENT |
| 1 |
May 17, 2012 (3:13 AM) |
.C.R. Holloway. |
A Night In Sweden |
hahahahahahahhahhahahahahahhahaha o man.... i swear! |
| 2 |
May 17, 2012 (2:20 AM) |
speechless |
Heading nowhere |
i feel you... emotional rollercoaster... still holding on tho |
| 3 |
May 17, 2012 (1:59 AM) |
H.H. Holloway |
Back to life |
"I need you to need me" isn't that what we all "Need" |
| 4 |
May 17, 2012 (1:53 AM) |
H.H. Holloway |
ALLow me two rePentroduce myself |
Oh wow! Operation: Endgame! That should've been the title to this piece or it could be the sequel... eh who knows |
| 5 |
May 17, 2012 (1:38 AM) |
MAVRICK |
ALLow me two rePentroduce myself |
Oh damn...A His'n & Hers'n Lee/Shee-thal. There goes the Poetic Neighborhood...Cowardly words, betta run-on. And not in sentence form. These two aint playin well with others...ha! Very Creative...this poetic battle with Corrae is like the Hatfields & McCoy's...ha...but yall fired some shit with those gold bics...nice job poets! |
| 6 |
May 17, 2012 (1:26 AM) |
MAVRICK |
Write Me... |
A Short Verse.
A Simple Poem.
I wrote it on the walls of your heart.
So you wouldn't feel so alone.
If you rub it gently.
It will hum a beautiful song.
One that soothes your weary Soul.
When the pain of life, dwells too long...
May My Write Help You Move-Along |
| 7 |
May 17, 2012 (1:24 AM) |
Mrz. Spout Fire |
Shethal |
Just came back for a re~read... to all who know the "herstory" it still amazes me how alike Leethal; Jazzy; Simply Nik & Fire are alike... |
| 8 |
May 17, 2012 (1:23 AM) |
Tha Truth |
Broken Kaleidoscopes And Sorrowful Medleys |
My big sister inspires me to write. Its in our blood;) sooooooooo loved this |
| 9 |
May 17, 2012 (1:19 AM) |
MAVRICK |
History |
Which side would you like for them to start with...The Dark History, or the Light?..ha..i'm diggin your Haiku's. I was trying not to make my comments longer than your pieces..ha |
| 10 |
May 17, 2012 (1:16 AM) |
MAVRICK |
How Many...? |
As much as it takes for you to BE-COME. I often ask myself these very same questions. I'm a Warrior. I wear my scars proudly. It hurts deeply, but when the time comes for me to pass-on. Life will know I hit back, because I left quite a few marks of my own...Fuck That!...Hit Back you aint no punk |
| 11 |
May 17, 2012 (1:13 AM) |
poetic crack |
Nice And Slow |
Nice keep ur pen moving fam |
| 12 |
May 17, 2012 (1:09 AM) |
MAVRICK |
Universes |
Limitless potential... |
| 13 |
May 17, 2012 (1:08 AM) |
Tha Truth |
I see Heaven in your Eyes |
Loved every word;) excellent ink |
| 14 |
May 17, 2012 (1:07 AM) |
MAVRICK |
Where are you...? |
:( |
| 15 |
May 17, 2012 (1:06 AM) |
MAVRICK |
Goodbyes... |
definitely been here. Everybody's gotta follow their own road. Decisions, Decisions... |
| 16 |
May 17, 2012 (1:03 AM) |
MAVRICK |
HeartBreak |
Very heart-felt. When the heart wants what it wants, its hard to get the mind to tell it something else. This scribe was full of deep emotion. |
| 17 |
May 17, 2012 (1:02 AM) |
Tha Truth |
Poetry battle 101 for dummies |
Shit;) |
| 18 |
May 17, 2012 (1:00 AM) |
poetic crack |
Just Naaasty |
fam u took straight to the point. Fiya all day. All that in the befroom but always a lafy have to fav it |
| 19 |
May 17, 2012 (1:00 AM) |
MAVRICK |
He Left Her... |
Closure...it would be nice to receive it, but it still doesn't make the pain go away. Why's, could go on forever. Both sides of this fence is full of them. You Brought the Pain Out Through the Screen with this one... |
| 20 |
May 17, 2012 (12:54 AM) |
jadsam68 |
Just Naaasty |
I think i need to find a corner and sit in and suck on my thumb...this was a put you to bed type of poem with all that heat |
| 21 |
May 17, 2012 (12:51 AM) |
MAVRICK |
Collisions |
Life tends to be all about the wrecks. But its those wrecks, that promote us to the next level. And that's the sick part. I pray she's a fighter. nicely stated Jazique...glad to see your pen again |
| 22 |
May 17, 2012 (12:49 AM) |
jadsam68 |
Just Naaasty |
Damn!!! you are so freaking good at being nasty... I have to close my eyes a few time and catch the visions these words create and man oh man oh man.. Damn ... is all that seems to come to mind.. |
| 23 |
May 17, 2012 (12:42 AM) |
sunshine40 |
MA |
Tears and tears and more tears wow baby no response needed |
| 24 |
May 16, 2012 (11:49 PM) |
Tha Truth |
Nice And Slow |
Very sweet str8 to the point;) luv tha ink |
| 25 |
May 16, 2012 (11:46 PM) |
sep |
Unspoken Words Of My Heart |
very beautifully written! everyone wont admit that with themselves doe! |
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