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""POETIC ADVICE" PT 2"
  by ~* labebamorena*~


If your ultimate goal is to win a poetry prize,
there are things you must do without compromise...
I had entered some work at considerable cost,
with no clue at all as to why I had lost...

So, I read all the ones favored in the past,
seeking form and design for words I could cast...
That’s when I discovered a key to their prose,
its illogical thoughts on unorganized rows...

The first verse should be vague,
confusing the style.
In the second verse make them think for a while...
Like, “In the beginning the ending was near”
or
“We basked in an ardent recollection of fear.”

Conclude with some incomprehensible phrase,
like,
“The prolific embrace of our foregone days...”

Don’t finish ideas in these lyrical events,
and avoid any phrases that seem to make sense...

If they don’t understand, it becomes a “deep thought.”
In depth they will ponder what meaning you sought...
They'll argue if you've written a limerick or rhyme,
then cast it aside as a “waste of their time...”

I'll likely be banned, or be forced to concele,
but I'm sharing the secret it takes to succeed
dont stress over structure,
dont worry about the flow
use thoughts you dont have and words you dont know... :P



*** MY USE TOOLS ***

LOTS OF ELOQUENT ELABORANT CONVERSATIONS WITH MY WHITE FRIENDS
& I ALWAYS MANAGE TO KEEP A THESAURUS HANDY....

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Date Submitted: Jun 20, 2009 (11:48 AM)
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  Tonya
07/08/09 (07:32 PM) 
Don’t finish ideas in these lyrical events, and avoid any phrases that seem to make sense... ...lmao ived read some of these poets...thought i just didnt get it...but now i see it was done on purpose...ctfu

  Snugasaglove (...
07/08/09 (07:24 PM) 
You put this under "humor," but this is TRUTH! I've seen some folks write like this FOR REAL! ---But you put 'em on BLAST! People who talk like that remind me of the old song "You talkin' Out The Side O' Neck!" lol

  ((Gitana))
06/20/09 (11:14 PM) 
LMAOOO....well, if this isn't the truth! I've often wondered the same thing myself...thanks for clearing it up!

  B. Rose
06/20/09 (06:46 PM) 
HIlarious but also truthful my dear... hot shit

  *~Raw Sensuali...
06/20/09 (01:05 PM) 
I'm lmao @ you up in here Lucy.... too freakin' funny.... your sense of humor always tickles me so deep.... lmao to no end....

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