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  by ghettoholidai90


sippin on patron
sittin on my own
thinkin wit da d. e. in my palm
hearin the sound of fire alarms
chair facin the door
2 died men on my floor
im jus waitin on some more
cause i know i heard two more
feelin da flames neck
but i aint done yet
got 4 more in the chamber and two whole nother clips
getaway whip
in a flash i could dip
but can i get don the hall befor they let it rip
leavin me ta rip
so im bitin on my lips
and puttin on a smile
everything is flowin ima make dis worth my while
and jus lik da fire my eyes are blazin
now some'm may explode
so i know its time ta go
i start bustin down the hallway because i seen a nose
blood leakin through his clothes
and its comin outta mine
vision gettin blurry im runnin outta time
so now im dual weildin and im bring out my nine
bullets start flyin
but all of em missin
all three of dem niggas is all by the entrance
im behind a pole bleedin losin all senses
i can't feel my guns so all i do is listen
i shot arond da corner i hit one in da leg
so he layin in da open i shot em in his head
one is comin towards me one headin out
i trip da one comin by and shot em in his mouth
move slowly toward da entrance peak around the side
i see em from behind
im shootin at his spine
but all dis time im half blind
focusin all a can im bustin wit one eye
down ta my last clip
i hope i don miss
right now im runnin and staggerin and shyt
arm jus gushin look lik a cut wrist
im drivin away from the scene wit da hammer on my hip
i see the last dude
i start bustin da tool
he drop i run em over and dispose of everything i used
get rid of all the old and get me some'm new
i lost allotta blood ima need a transfusion befor im through
i guess i did it big cause i made it on the news
but aint no photo of me so i guess i got away
im thinkin how long can i keep des bitch niggas at bay........


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Date Submitted: Oct 29, 2009 (09:35 PM)
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  candyapple01
11/06/09 (02:41 PM) 
This some deep, mafia type shit. Great scribe!

  malushka
11/02/09 (03:06 PM) 
im glad im da 1st one 2 comment on this one....this is deep n im loving it.....keep it up

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