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"Poetically Disturbed"
  by ReFlecTion


Lately I feel like all of my writings have been a waste of time
Not enough emotion, not enough imagery
Just not enough of me

I used to lay on the bed with my pen and pad
and the words would just flow
Now I lay on the bed and just stare
Thinking too hard about a topic-then struggling for that first line
Whats going on in my head?
What happened to my flow, to my intensity?
What happened to me?

I'm just going to step away from the computer and put down my pen
I'm going to take a look at myself because I know that theres a poet inside
When i find her I am going to let my words explode on my GS spot
You see, I believe that the words I write are a REFLECTION of me
As you read my writings I want you to feel me, to relate, to see inside
So when I come back
I'm coming strong..
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Date Submitted: Sep 19, 2007 (10:36 PM)
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  --->QUEENPIN O...
12/23/07 (10:46 PM) 
Now I lay on the bed and just stare Thinking too hard about a topic-then struggling for that first line...MAN GET OUTTA MY HEAD GIRL!! LOL....I SWEAR I FEEL THIS EXACT SAME WAY....10 EASY

  Jojo13
10/04/07 (10:35 PM) 
i feel this way sumtimes. but the words come eventually, usu. when u not tryin to think of them

  Preacher Dawso...
09/30/07 (12:41 AM) 
I see You on that, but keep in mind to let it flow, don't force it. When I write I write from the heart and all my poems execpt the one I wrote to my wife are spiritual, check them out when you get a chance.

  --Xzavier
09/26/07 (10:00 PM) 
i love that poem boo!

  LostGurl
09/26/07 (06:18 PM) 
All of us poets on here can relate. I get writers block all the time. Don't worry the lost words will come back when you least expect them to.

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