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"Poetigasm"
  by Chocolatezeus
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Dickin Me!!! by Dawn






Each day
I am satiated
Needing to read
What you posted today
Or your heat again

Words of rhythmic eroticism
Turning me hard as rock candy
Leaving me dripping and ready

You have me
Pre come to your
Mental heat
Third degree burning me
But I won’t let it stop me

I see you make love to me
Fuck me senseless
With just your
Words and visuals

You create
The ultimate
Sex play

Making me feel it
In my groin and my
Heads today

Damn I am weak
Everything has me
Needing to read you again
Taste the lyrical orgasms

Give em to me
You got what I need
Don’t withhold it from me
Its your fault I am this way

Like a junkie
You got my fix
Pookie and the prom queen
Won’t stop me from
This need

So I read
And find more to read
Bouncing up and down
Waiting for the new
Renditions of your
Giving me

Poetigasms

Deep deep
I mentally skeet skeet
Leaving puddles mentally
My mind shudders and screams
Gripping the astral plane
For orgasmic steadying

As you got me once again

Bust
Bust
Bust

My mental cream seeps
Deep into my erotic mentality

As I continue to
Read you again




From the chocolatezeus collection 7/22/08 ©
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Date Submitted: Jul 22, 2008 (12:13 PM)
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  ShezsFrsh_Y@D!...
10/12/08 (02:27 AM) 
DAMN...nice response im feelin it all the way and plus u jus brought a whole other side of poetry's sex life to the table without the physical part...jus mentallly, great write....10 strzs much love!

  Drew2007
10/12/08 (12:03 AM) 
DAMN DIS SHIT IS TOUGHHH. GREAT RESPONSE. LOVED DA FLOW IN DIS PIECE RIGHT HERE. KEEP EM COMIN. 10 STARZ FROM MI. UNTIL NEXT TYME. DUECEZ

  PoeticYungn
08/09/08 (05:13 PM) 
ha, this was a very nice response to her poem and i'm lovin it much luv n respect

  Sincere6026
07/31/08 (12:26 AM) 
OHHH Shit!!!!! That was so damn good!! I mean damn!!!!! Hold up....Got damn that was good!!! Ten stars and a fav plus you earned braggin rights!!! LMAO!!!

  Rayna
07/29/08 (02:31 PM) 
that was a nice response to dickin me. you both have talent and you chose a good choice of words. nice poem, keep em coming

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