GS Poetry Home
Home
GS Blog
Media
Events
      Poems      Poets      Submit Poems      Collaboetry      SoulCasts     


 
GS Poetry
 
     
           

Your Ad Here

   
  arrow poeticfrost's PREVIOUS POEM poeticfrost's NEXT POEM arrow  
     
     
  
"poetry raped me"
  by poeticfrost


i shouldn't put feeling
into my words
it leaves me vulnerable
nothing good comes of opening up
it makes heads butt
i should not challenge thought
poetry is a lie of the worst kind
i should hold it all in
become a prisoner of my own mind
before you shackle me to yours
free thinking is my crime
if we don't share kindred thoughts
one of us is obviously wrong
deserving of violation
hence, poetry has raped me
locked up my soul
and thrown away the key
made my dearest friends
wardens over me
made me betray myself
when all i really seek
is to bond with another soul
does that justify the chastisement
brought against me?
cuz sticks and stones may
break my bones
but poetry has thrashed me
beyond any cruel & unusual
torture known to man
i wanna write it down
burst these fetters off me
but ironically i know
that only when i retired my pen
will i truly break free
-dawn m frost
© 2000-2009 GS Poetry. All rights reserved.
search icon
Date Submitted: May 07, 2007 (05:12 AM)
search icon
Viewed: 125  times
user icon
Poem Favorited By: 1 Member
send the poem to friend
   
     
lock Log in to add this poem to your favorites.



comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 10/15/07 (01:33 AM)
Author: Nilla
Poem Title: ii Made LuV 2 Poetry

Page: 1 
 


comment icon  COMMENTS (4)
  darkclowd
10/15/07 (04:49 PM) 
liked it very much...

  Artisst
10/15/07 (03:55 PM) 
controversial, sentimental, authentic, powerful, nice play-on-words, good structure, nice realism, sincere...emotive...nice smooth yet resistant flow.."for without resistance there can be no change" 10 lil one...

  Nilla
10/15/07 (01:26 AM) 
Wow. Maybe you shouldn't write if it makes you feel this way? Nice usage of word, but aye -- ii think you'd definitely find some disagreement with this piece.

  candy-b
08/29/07 (07:16 AM) 
good concept on this one

Page(s): 1 
lock Log In to comment on this poem.
     
     
  arrow poeticfrost's PREVIOUS POEM poeticfrost's NEXT POEM arrow  



 
Site Links
About GS Poetry
FAQs
Testimonials
GS Gold Membership
Links
Copyright Information
Contact Us
 
Site Features
Buy Credits
Promote GS
Events
Collaboetry
Soulcast
Poet Search
RSS icon RSS Feeds
 
GSoul Baby-Tees
GSoul Baby-Tees
Support GS and urban poetry by purchasing an official GSoul Baby-Tee. Order Now!
 
Donate
Help GS continue its efforts to maintain a creative and supportive poetry site. Any amount is welcomed and appreciated.
 



© GS Poetry 2000-2008.  All rights reserved. Terms of Use | Privacy