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"Ponder"
  by XPERIENCE



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I want to be the center of your inner
most thoughts
two stepping on ideas
slowly dancing in your forethought
and permanently dwelling in your subconscious mind
so even when you attempt to forget
your brain sends you back to me
like a magnetic force field
triggering memories
that wont let you escape me
more than a dream
softly streaming through your ID
unconsciously teasing your
pleasure principal
in the form of premonitions
until i became an instinctual part
of you
consciously carrying mental pictures
to your EGO
where i no longer am
a thought processing
but instead
reality that stands before you
yet untouchable
you reach out realizing
im a figment of your imagination
sensually stroking your SUPER-EGO
where seductive fantasies
are released into a prophetic pool
of emotional feelings
not neglectful of spiritual ideas
there i float back on brain waves
to a clear concise mind as you come
to the conclusion that
i eternally live inside you
and it all started from a simple
ponder!

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Date Submitted: Oct 29, 2008 (03:49 PM)
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  Knowthyself
03/28/09 (07:05 PM) 
WOW! This was Hot! the music the beautiful words and the energy. Nicely written and powerful and strong....I felt as if your ponder was a spell. More ink please!!

  LateefahFreeWO...
03/26/09 (09:04 AM) 
Girl this kind of thinking leaves grooves that run deep in the brain's tissue; that's deep. I love the way you did this, great flow. I need to take a few lessons from you. 10 pts.

  Poetic Lyricis...
03/20/09 (08:54 PM) 
That was hot...Love tha concept

  Cornfed
02/27/09 (05:17 PM) 
Wow! Your words just float of the pen! Your ink is like lace! Your thought combine with flow so easy! Pen blessed by the carpenters father! Some one knew what the word was! Its you!

  Shani. Medicin...
01/10/09 (02:00 PM) 
WOW...i can visualize u ingraining & imprinting yourself n2 his subconscious which means u have strong powers of ntent. Enjoyed thoroughly write on!

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