IN OCTOBER 2006 I BECAME A MEMBER OF GS, REALLY DIDN’T KNOW THE HELL TO EXPECT…BUT I KNEW ONE THING FOR SURE, I HAD TO EARN MY RESPECT, SO I STARTED WRITING, PUT MY SKILLS TO THE TEST//
AT FIRST I WAS A BIT SHY, DIDN’T KNOW HOW MUCH I SHOULD SAY
BUT I STARTED WITH REAL LIFE SITUATIONS & MY LIFE DAY BY DAY,
I STARTED TALKING TO A FEW PEOPLE, WHO SAID THEY LIKED MY WRITES, THE “LIKED” TURNED INTO “LOVED” AND SOME OF US EVEN BECAME TIGHT// I KEPT WRITING MY POEMS AS A MEANS TO VENT IN SOME WAY, CUZ BACK HOME I FELT ALONE, NO ONE TO UNDERSTAND MY PAIN… THE MORE I VENTED THE BETTER I FELT, I KINDA EVEN LEARNED HOW TO HANDLE THE CARDS THAT I WAS BEING DEALT// THEN I STARTED USING MY IMAGINATION, MAKING MY WRITINGS MORE LIKE ART FORM,
THEN PEOPLE REALLY STARTED NOTICING THAT MY WRITINGS WERE FAR FROM THE NORM// PEOPLE STARTED ADDING ME AS A FAVORITE POET, MY NAME AND MY POEMS WERE BEING MENTIONED ALL THE TIME...THEN ONE DAY A GS OG TOLD ME I WAS ROLLING WITH THE BIG DOGS NOW… THAT’S WHEN I KNEW MY WRITINGS WERE MORE THAN JUST RHYMES// ONE DAY, MR AC HIMSELF CAME TO HOUSE AND TOLD ME & J@YBOOGZ HOW HIGHLY HE THOUGHT OF US BOTH, SOMEONE I HAD NEVER MET BEFORE… DAMN AC, I WAS AT A LOST OF WORDS, YOU HAD ME AT “HELLO” FROM THE ENTRANCE OF MY DOOR…I WISH I WAS DRESSED PRETTIER, OR HAD WINE FOR YOU TO DRINK… BUT YOUR VISIT LEFT ME DUMBAFIED & I’M SORRY, BUT I COULDN’T EVEN THINK// BUT MY ULTIMATE HIGH WAS JUST A WEEK AGO, MY FAVORITE POET TOLD ME THAT SHE THOUGHT I WAS THE SHIT, MAN OLE MAN, I WAS RUNNING AROUND THE HOUSE SCREAMING OMG AND DOING A MILLION BACK FLIPS!!! I REACHED MY PEAK, MY ULTIMATE HIGH, MY POINT OF WRITING SATISFACTION, HEARING THOSE WORDS COME OUT HER MOUTH LEFT ME WITH A PERMANENT HAPPY WTF? REACTION.
SO NOW IT’S TIME FOR ME TO BREAK FROM GS,
I’LL BE BACK, JUST DON’T KNOW WHEN,
BUT IN THE MEANTIME KEEP SHOWING YOUR GURL SOME LOVE AND WHEN I COME BACK… I’LL CATCH UP WITH YA THEN…
BUT I PROMISE IT’S JUST FOR A WHILE…. I’MA MISS YA, I LOVE YA, I’LL LEAVE YOU ALL WITH MY BEST WISHES, THIS LAST POEM… AND MY “NEVER FORGET ME” SMILE…
"I STARTED WITH REAL LIFE SITUATIONS & MY LIFE DAY BY DAY,
I STARTED TALKING TO A FEW PEOPLE, WHO SAID THEY LIKED MY WRITES, THE “LIKED” TURNED INTO “LOVED” AND SOME OF US EVEN BECAME TIGHT// I KEPT WRITING MY POEMS AS A MEANS TO VENT IN SOME WAY, CUZ BACK HOME I FELT ALONE, NO ONE TO UNDERSTAND MY PAIN… THE MORE I VENTED THE BETTER I FELT, I KINDA EVEN LEARNED HOW TO HANDLE THE CARDS THAT I WAS BEING DEALT"--funny cuss thats exactly how it was for me. down to the very last fuckin le... [+]more
"I STARTED WITH REAL LIFE SITUATIONS & MY LIFE DAY BY DAY,
I STARTED TALKING TO A FEW PEOPLE, WHO SAID THEY LIKED MY WRITES, THE “LIKED” TURNED INTO “LOVED” AND SOME OF US EVEN BECAME TIGHT// I KEPT WRITING MY POEMS AS A MEANS TO VENT IN SOME WAY, CUZ BACK HOME I FELT ALONE, NO ONE TO UNDERSTAND MY PAIN… THE MORE I VENTED THE BETTER I FELT, I KINDA EVEN LEARNED HOW TO HANDLE THE CARDS THAT I WAS BEING DEALT"--funny cuss thats exactly how it was for me. down to the very last fuckin letter *deep sigh remembering them days* [-]collapse
I really loved the emotion in this poem!! Come back soon sweet heart, We'll all miss ya!! I'm new to this site, but I feel that all peeps in here are like Familia to me!! Even though I don't know ya yet?? I'll miss ya, you're a great writer sweet heart!! Check me out when you get back, I'll love to get to know ya!! Ten *s
wow!!! i didnt kno this was going on girl what tha..... damn ma i wish i would have been here then, but im glad your back now and i sure did miss you, i also had to take a break due to personal problems at home but im back now ....still working things out here but i got myself together enough to where i can get back on here and be sociable again...lol i love you girl!!
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