this was amazing!!! it really touched me in a way thats so unexplainable...every line every word was brought forth with so much power yet with humbleness and compassion. it expresses a hurt that only certain ones will truly understand. it shows how u care about this young girl. just bcuz u r sayin poor young girl it doesnt mean that u are belittling her it just shows how sincere u are about her and how u want the best for her so for her u pray...awesome piece and definite fav:)
Loved it when you made certain words concrete through patterned repitition. "... In the corner crying, the baby is crying..." --- It is a sad story, and naevity can be deadly. But it is not her fault. The world can be papercuts and origami.