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"Precious times"
  by no shit.itsanalias.


Watching you sleep is precious

Time is a blink
And my eyes cannot perceive
The cells being born
And dying upon your face
As putty bones lift up
Chubby cheeks
And make your smile so

…precious

so sleep
hold that dream
in your ever evolving
learning menagerie

when you wake I’ll be ‘Mommy’
and all that entitles
but tomorrow
you’ll learn of my flaws

and I’ll still be immune
to all yours
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Date Submitted: Oct 22, 2009 (03:50 PM)
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  vagrom
10/27/09 (06:05 PM) 
I agree with KingArt...REALLY diggin' your ink

  RedLoveSong
10/26/09 (03:26 PM) 
*typo* Wouldn\'t it..?

  RedLoveSong
10/26/09 (03:25 PM) 
Wouldn\'t be something if we could be loved or if we could love adults the way we love children, unconditionally. Precious piece.

  after vision
10/26/09 (12:36 PM) 
as a father i know this vision painted -- evn on the days that i was going through - to look into their rooms and see them rest with no worries meant a lot to me -- they are grown now and it is hard for me to see them as such - touching write my poet

  --->QUEENPIN O...
10/24/09 (07:22 PM) 
OMG!!!! *tear*...this was so beautiful....u captured the essence of a mothers love beautifully...omg...i love this...

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