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"PRELUDE TO A KISS"
  by YoungZurc
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Prelude to a Kiss by BrEeZyWrOtE


THE STORM IS OVER, IT HAS FINALLY CALMED.
CONDITIONS OF FORMER WEATHER HAD MY FOREHEAD IN MY PALMS.

HEARTBREAK REIGNED, ALMOST TO THE HEIGHT OF ME.
MY SOUL THUNDERED FOR HER,TO THE POINT IT WAS ENLIGHTENING.

I GOT A NEW UMBRELLA, ALTHOUGH IT HAD BEEN A DROUGHT.
THOUGHT IF I HAD THIS ONE THEN THE LAST, I'D FORGET ABOUT.

& BOY WAS I WRONG
HAD A TEMPORARY CEILING
THAT WAS LEAKING ALL ALONG.

IF HOME IS WHERE YOUR HEART IS
THEN THERE SHOULD BE A PICTURE OF US
POSTED ON OUR FRIDGE.

TO BE TOGETHER WE WERE DESTINED.
ALL THE FEELINGS GET UNWRAPPED
WHENEVER I'M IN YOUR PRESCENCE.

THERE IS A REASON THAT I TELL YOU THIS
IF I KNOW YOU , HOW I THINK I DO
THEN HERE COMES A KISS !!!!
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Date Submitted: Jun 29, 2009 (06:49 PM)
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  BrEeZyWrOtE
06/29/09 (07:04 PM) 
Well honestly. i love this. what a wonderful response to my poem. great job hun :)

  *~Raw Sensuali...
06/29/09 (07:03 PM) 
I love the way you pen love dear... love the umbrella metaphor...

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