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"PRETTY WINGS PT.II"
  by bbeauty
  - This Poem is a response to the poem PRETTY WINGS by bbeauty


I PUT THREE INCH INDENTATIONS ON HIS FACE
FOUR ON EACH CHEEK FOR BALANCE...........
SCRATCHES OF GLADNESS AND SCRATCHES OF SADNESS..
ONE,TWO,THREE,THE NUMBER OF UNITY....
PERMENANT REMINDERS OF UTILIZED TIME OF DREAMS SHARED
THAT VANISHED LIKE VAPORS INTO THE ATOMOSHERE.......
SHEDDING TEARS USED TO CLEANSE THE MISERY WITH DEEP FEELINGS
OF REGRET MY HEART,MY MIND, MY SOUL RELEASES
THE INSANITY THAT HAD ME INCARCERATED WITH INFATUATION
.........HERES YOUR PRETTY WINGS.........................
..........FLY
ABOVE THIS CIRCUMSTANCE PAIN HAS TRANSITIONED
........A BEAUTIFUL BUTTER FLY........
I'VE BECOME ONE WITH THE WIND AND THE ELEMENTS THAT
APPRREICATE THE UGLINESS OF BEAUTY.........................
I RELAEASE YOU BACK INTO YOUR HABITATE OF DYFUNCTION
.................................................HERES YOUR PRETTY WINGS.......


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Date Submitted: Aug 30, 2009 (11:15 PM)
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  Successful
10/06/09 (12:12 AM) 
this was a very deep write mama loved the emotion in this write

  big josh
10/02/09 (03:33 PM) 
yea I agree with embon on this one. this was indeed an emotional write. nice job :)

  Embonpoint
08/30/09 (11:47 PM) 
Emotional write girl. Unique presentation

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