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"Priceless Uniqueness"
  by Chocolatezeus
  - This Poem is a response to the poem I’m Weird by Group: Weirdo's. Not so a...


a special breed
stand out yet hidden
smoke filled analysis

they think they know us
yet they can't see
the basis of
our being

standard issue
generalized compartmentalization
never accurate
description of
who we are

love so strong it inspires hate
ability to disassociate
blend into the harshest environments

lump me
if you can
attempts to dissect
merely lead to
stymied dead ends

yes I am the unexplained
then again I am merely
the evolution of variety

we walk among you
raising the bar of your comforting
exposing your inadequacies

we are the evolution
needing not to conform
but pave the way to
living more than
staying in your assembly line mentality

we see your attitude
the shake of your head in disbelief
smart mouth comments
anything to draw attention to
your ineptness

different
unique
weird

all because
we walk to a different beat
showing individuality

well let them continue with
their manufactured living
we will keep on
displayed in the spotlights

as they follow our lead
wish they were you and me
jealous because they want to be

to be
weird and
free



from the chocolatezeus collection 10/1/08 (c)
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Date Submitted: Oct 01, 2008 (06:39 PM)
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  *F1* BROWN
10/01/08 (10:57 PM) 
I love the direct and driven way you came with this..even called other jealous for not just letting go and being free weird or not...lovely

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