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"Pricless"
  by B. Rose


I could possibly one day get you all the finer things.
Charms on the bracelet, necklace plus diamond rings.
But tell me this
Whats so fine about those things.
Is it because they attract attention and bling.

As far as I'm concerned you're a priceless item.
To be cherished
And no price should define you.

Look...

I know diamonds are a girls bestfriend.
Well I shine brighter than any diamond on the planet.
Let me be that substitute
For that trinket tha occupies your hand.
And see if everyday you don't display a smile so grand.
Worth more than the amount of every combined a million.
Plus im sure jewlery
Could make you orgasm like I can...

Lol...
Okay that last line was a bad one.
But im just trying to prove a point.
Would you rather acquire a couple of rings.
Or me
Who will take you past cloud 9 & take you to the rings...

... Of Saturn...

Quite the out of body E-X

-perince

Make your girl be like

"OH!!! ME NEXT!!!!"

This is a proposal better than engagement.
Clearer then the meaning
A wedding band symbolizes.

So I can supply you with illuminated wrists.
As long as you realize
I do it because to me you are a priceless.
And you wrist can do all kind of shinning.
But if you define yourself by it
Then its pretty much lifeless
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Date Submitted: Sep 04, 2008 (03:47 AM)
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  *@ngelic~Wordz...
09/12/08 (01:12 AM) 
wow this is definitely a very romantic piece. i really love it. *smiles*

  B-Y
09/09/08 (09:35 PM) 
Kinda reminds me of that Jay-Z's girls best friend video...but nevertheless it was a great write.....you know what it is partna....continue to push that pen...B-Y

  *~§Poetic§~*
09/08/08 (10:42 PM) 
sorry i been mia lately but dayumm i know what i been missin shit like this dang this relates to my newest piece called used goods but its not on gs yet but ne who this shit is beautiful priceless perfect comparison to a womans worth you got my ten Poetic...

  MzSpoon
09/07/08 (04:13 PM) 
This was such a sentimental write that words seem to escape me. I'm glad that your kind aren't complete extinct.

  Quette
09/07/08 (02:27 AM) 
This was very ncely done and put together, you flow was hot and the concept was great!

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