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"pride"
  by tiffany99


  N/A:

My pride is my soul
My soul immortal
Break this body
Ill not ask for mercy
Even undone
I kneel to no one
Me
The only
and one



  deja`vu:

Our 'pride',
our 'life',
in which we abide,
cannot be broken,
for we stand proud,
and it is not just law but is also spoken,
try your best to bring 'us' down,
but no matter,
for we will walk out with 'our' heads held high without one little frown,

  N/A:

In my book
If you have no pride
Youre not worth knowing!

My pride
My savior
Makes me a god of thunder
The worlds most extraordinary lover
The deepest thinker
Most profound feeler
No one is my match
No one is my equal
I pity those who are not me
They will never know what its like
To take life in
With pure greed
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Date Submitted: Jan 02, 2008 (09:17 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 01/05/08 (09:57 AM)
Author: Tab Tab
Poem Title: "humble"

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comment icon  COMMENTS (5)
  King Of Edist...
01/15/08 (09:57 PM) 
i like it itz gud how 2 females work 2gether and i will give it 10 starz

  Quiet Storm
01/06/08 (06:06 PM) 
i like this, ya'll both did a nice job on this write and i'm feelin ya-pride is def. something people should have in themselves

  Tab Tab
01/05/08 (09:44 AM) 
If it's arrogance you were portraying, it's arrogance I'm feeling. Good poetry ladies!!

  PoeticSoulja
01/03/08 (01:00 PM) 
I'm feeling the positive message being conveying through these words with a hint of arrogance.I wish it would longer though Deja :P Just one more verse from you would have been great but yall still got the message across nice write

  lil rob
01/03/08 (02:03 AM) 
I LIKE I LOVIN HOW 2 FEMALES CAN WORK 2GETHA GOOD SHIT MA 4REAL 10STARZ :)

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