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"Profound Love"
A A.C.H. and MzFyne_N_Blessed Collaboration


  MzFyne_N_Blessed:

Talk about us being together...
They say we never should
But I never thought I could...
...I never thought I would...
--Stayed in love with you--
-I stay prayed up for you-
.And by your side, I stood.
..Out of the bad came the good..
And this is how I know that God has been so good
--Cause life teaches a lesson--
.Our love is still a blessing.
...Only when I never thought I could...

  A.C.H.:

They said we never should
Be together but by my side you stood
What do they know about us
Obviously not much

If they knew the love I have for you
You know my words are true. Any obstacle? We'll get through
Our love is a treasure something that you can't measure
We'll last through any weather. Can we stay together?

Baby, I know we can
Right by you is where I'll stand
Listen, come take my hand
You're my woman I'm your man

  MzFyne_N_Blessed:

Ooh Do you remember the time when you said you couldn't take no more
And that wasn't what you signed up for?
And do you remember the time when I said I was done believing
and I want no more of this dreaming
I wanted leave for some many reasons.
But then I had a thought that I love you too much
To ever forget about us.
And that's when I said
Babe, Im staying
Right here, Im staying
Thru the nights Im staying
By your side Im staying
When we ride Im staying
So on my knees Im praying
Nowhere Im going
Our love is growing
Do you hear what Im sayin?
--Cause babe Im staying--
And that's when I came to realize
that's why our love is so profound
Raising my hands and thanking him
For giving us a solid ground
What a true love we have found.
--Even after the rain--
Heyy and after the pain.
Its time to dry off now and
celebrate what we have gained.
No time to refrain
Open our mouths and give praise
Love...Embrace...
Yes...Okay...
By your smile...my heart is still astound.
Our love is so profound.

  A.C.H.:

I remember when things were tough
And I thought that love was enough
Found out I needed patience and kindness too
If it wasn't for that we'd be through.

I took a step back and started to pray
Please God show me the way
He responded letting me know what to do
Saying just be patient and stick with your boo

So baby here I am
Right by you is where I'll stand
Dropping to one knee as I take your hand
A future with you is my final plan

The love we have was built on solid ground
The love we share will grow leaps and bounds
The love we make is sweeter than anything we can dream of
I'm so glad we have a profound love.




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Date Submitted: Jun 12, 2009 (11:07 PM)
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  msz.unique
06/19/09 (07:34 PM) 
awww this was beautiful! tear* both of ya'll words flow soo well together and the emotion is felt very strongly. great write!

  daidai_dts4l
06/19/09 (01:56 PM) 
this flowed so well together and it shows how a relationship can over come the bad 10stars for both of yall

  DA POETRY KING
06/18/09 (12:22 PM) 
im diggin dat poem,,,,ya'll went hard on dis one,,,,,sometimes it is very hard to fathom the thought of love,,,but in this poem yall make it real clear,,,nice write Ten Starz *~Da Poetry King~*

  SmAsH/BaByFaCe
06/15/09 (11:46 PM) 
This was an emotion filled write from you two. I felt that love just coming out as i read line by line. God is definitely the glue that holds relationships together, he gets all the praise and glory. TEN STARS! across the board

  Μz Ρ...
06/14/09 (03:55 PM) 
this is so real.. Love is about staying through the storm .. and being thankful for what u have xx

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