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"Progress"
  by Guey2


I saw strength today.
When you stood, you knew you could fall, but you did it anyway.
Sometimes it frustrates me that we can't fully communicate
But for the moment that's what makes the things you do the most beautiful
You have no doubts, because you do not know they exist
Insecurities are invisble to you, so you progress at your own amusement
Yes you do progress
With no after thoughts, I smile that you do not regret
Within you i see human natures deepest secrets
You smile whenever you fall because you only get closer
I belieave that is the reason i unconciously give you my hand
so you will hold up
I saw strength today, my Godson.

and I did so.....only because you stood up.


I dedicate this to you little man, even though you wouldn't let me put you down so i could write it. smh.
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Date Submitted: Nov 04, 2009 (04:07 PM)
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  Monae'
11/14/09 (06:34 PM) 
Awww! I want to cry...this was such a sentimental piece of work. I truly enjoyed this one. 10 stars! And I will fav.

  Ewe Debe
11/07/09 (02:49 AM) 
This is awesome :) I love this it speaks volumes I really enjoyed this

  Tonya
11/04/09 (09:39 PM) 
love this...they have no fear no inhibitations they are humanity at its best...wish i still felt like that...a fav

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