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"Promise"
  by young lover
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Promise by mamas baby


I know you go through hurt we all do, I also know the pain he caused you. Then I wonder why would they do such a thing I dont understand but you dont got to worry no more cause im your man, and here's the plan. To care for you like they never did to have the greatess relationship no secrets nuthin from you will be hid. And to do the things that they wouldnt do to cherish, comfort and encourage you, to guide, protect and love, cause I know your sent from above, your that important in my life i'll treat you like a princess better yet my wife. I'll give the world for you im no wher near cheap so this is my promise to you in I never make one I cant keep. jordan A.B.
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Date Submitted: Nov 22, 2008 (01:23 PM)
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  koolaid
11/25/08 (04:01 PM) 
awwwwwwww

  ladybugkk'sbab...
11/23/08 (12:44 AM) 
awwwwwwwwww omg dats so cute dat is sweet ahe is a very lucky lady an dats how all men should treat they woman ima fav dis 10 stars dats deep

  lil'bitt
11/23/08 (12:31 AM) 
awww this was sweet j =]

  DREA23
11/22/08 (02:05 PM) 
this was sweet, nicely done

  mamas baby
11/22/08 (01:35 PM) 
speechless

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