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"PROMISE"
  by 8286741787


TODAY AS I WOKE. TO SEE THE SUN RISE. I THOUGHT OF YOU. LOOKING TO THE HEAVENS ABOVE, A DOVE FLEW BY. IT SEEMS AS THOUGH THE CLOUDS LIFTED, AND SO DID I. NOT A CARE IN THE WORLD. FOR ONCE.........AT PEACE. TODAY SEEMS LIKE IT SHOULD. SUBTLE AND SURREN, MY MIND CLEAR AND FREE. NEGATIVE NOT AN OPTION. POSITIVE THE STATE I'M IN. LOOKING TWORDS THE FUTURE, I CANT SEE KNOWING THE LOVE I HAVE FELT. SO RICH IN POWER. EMOTIONS I HAVE NEVER FELT, OR CHOSE NOT TO FEEL. BRAND NEW THE FEELING IN MY MENTAL. HAVING AN OPTIMISTIC OUTLOOK FOR WHATS TO COME. I NOW SEE WHAT IT WAS YOU WERE TEACHING ME FOR SO MANY YEARS.

THE FUTURES NOT PROMISED TO ANYONE. BUT, THIS IS MINE TO YOU. OURS IS ETCHED IN STONE. AND I WILL NEVER FAULTER. THIS I PROMISE. HONEST AND TRUE. THIS I PROMISE. ALWAYS IN LOVE.



"THIS I PROMISE!"
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Date Submitted: May 03, 2008 (05:06 PM)
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  dontnohow
05/22/08 (01:28 PM) 
what a promise.... wish i had that given to me...nice...10+

  Quiet Storm
05/22/08 (08:51 AM) 
aww this is really beautiful...i can imagine wut ure talkin about and a pretty image pops into my mind...great write and anotha 10 starz

  DJ-GZeus
05/21/08 (08:29 PM) 
wow dude...this is sweet man...still maybe you could try breakin you poem into bars to make it easier for readers to digest...its just a thought..but either way this poem is very nice and well written...still just a thought....ten stars

  ShaNayia
05/21/08 (01:31 PM) 
This really well written, Just beatuful... Simple but real... Nice, 10starz

  SUNNY BUNNY
05/21/08 (12:54 PM) 
this love you speak of brought tears to my eyes. the serenity in your words was remarkably beautiful. i truly loved this peice and i thank you for sharing it. --- sunny bunny

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