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"Promise Me"
  by A.Renee


Promise me baby u won't leave again/ sometimes u drive me crazy/
I break out in tears/ u hurt me boy even if u don't mean it/
I'll do anything i love u even if you don't see it, believe it/
When i think i can't go on, you are there 4 Comfort/
I run from the world, to u/ u cover me so I'm muffled from it/
Tell me something, anything/ u my dream literally/ i would be wit u every day if i could/ and u get mad cus i can't/ u fight wit me and then u leave me/
I cry myself to sleep and ima cry when i awake/ i wanna be wit u every day/

I know u don't try to make me feel low/
I feel like I’m being lied to when you go/
Promise me, promise me/ our love will never die
Promise me, promise me/ u won't make me cry

I love u/ when i need hug/you're always there
When i fight wit u/im going in cycles dude/ but if u need me, im always here/
hold me in your arms forever/ don't ever let me go, the weather/
is to cold witout us 2gether/ my baby, it's terrible/
i need u/ i give u everything but it seem/ u don’t appreciate me/
and i don’t receive u/ as i should/ promise me you'll be good/
I’m starting to question your love/ I’m be on another quest 4 love/
if u don’t promise me/ so promise me and don’t guess or think/
know u love me

I know u don't try to make me feel low/
I feel like I’m being lied to when you go/
Promise me, promise me/ our love will never die
Promise me, promise me/ u won't make me cry

A. Renée
(Back in love-Estelle)
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Date Submitted: Jun 09, 2008 (06:07 PM)
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  That_Tiphany_T...
10/25/09 (12:00 AM) 
WOW THiS HAD ME ALMOST iN TEARS jUST CASUE iTS SUCH A FAMiLiAR FEELiN FOR ME; CURRENTLY iNFACT. KEEP UP THE WRiTES U HAVE TALENT.

  BrEeZyWrOtE
10/18/09 (02:22 PM) 
Been here before. I\'d say, never let a man put you in a situation where you feel like your being cheated out of affection. But that\'s just me because I\'m in a situation like that and I\'m stuck. Lol very emotional. Keep writing sweetie. :)

  Lily_Bunny
10/10/09 (05:31 PM) 
its nice. i like it alot.

  Elicit
10/09/09 (06:57 PM) 
For reasons why read some stuff from arch angel Like i beleive it was Ohur of darkness or something dlow isnt so much here in this one.

  Elicit
10/09/09 (06:56 PM) 
Very emotional i dont know as a write as a while though. It failed to keep my attion fully on it. Though you painted the picture well. If i were to rate id give a 7 if this is bad i apologize i only give my thought truthfully.

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