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".promises made in blood ."
  by Ravell


...hold me down and let me drink the poison
smear the blood stained kiss on my lips
cut along the lines of my former self-being
and in flames i burn holding this promise made in blood....
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Date Submitted: Jun 22, 2007 (03:18 PM)
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  Daniel William...
10/19/08 (05:42 PM) 
This is good. It's short. Ten stars. Daniel

  Nilla
06/20/08 (08:15 AM) 
that was deep as fuck to be so damn short. *smiles* nicely scribed, hun.

  Lara
06/20/08 (05:17 AM) 
wow this is one hot write... def unique and original... 10 stars from me and a fav

  Ambie
05/27/08 (12:20 AM) 
this was short, but still has meaning and was very deep and showed no simplicity...love it

  WIZ
05/20/08 (10:41 PM) 
THATS HOT , FIRE BURNING IN JUST A SHORT BUT POWERFUL PUNCH! DIGGING THIS TOTALLY! DA WIZ WAS HERE!

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