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"Prostitute Flange; Customer 1"
  by Lajhae


15 years old, with glimmering brown eyes,
a physique that could hook any guy. Very smart
young lady, talented in every way. Its
ashame that she let herself slip away.

She's been used all her life, stepped on
and hurt. So many times she was left lying in the dirt.
She was told she was loved, and then had her heart ripped
in two, she was so tired of feelin like
a lonely shru.

She tried to fall in love, but whatever she
gave was never enough. Even though it killed herself inside
she tried to be tough.

After a while she started thinkin bout somethings,
"maybe I should use them, instead of them usin me."
In that very instant her morals changed quickly.
Starting a story that could make u feel sickly.

She started answerin her fone when it rang late at night,
usin the same lines they used on her and workin em right.
Sexy ass red nigga; steady callin and settin up dates, she
had a sick feelin in her stomach but a smile on her face.

Day after day past and her first appointment approached.
And the butterflies in her stomach felt more like a million roach.
He walked in the door and licked his lips, then headed her way
and grabbed her by the hips. Caressing her body as if
it was sweetest thing. Touchin her like they were in love,
even though it was a fling.

She layed on her back and seduced him with her eyes.
She didn't know wether to be proud.....or to cry.
They went for hours as pleasure took over her guilt.
Now she really knew how these guys really felt.

Night after night he called and set one appointment
after another. She threw everything out the
window she learned from her mother. After a while
she was rewarded for what she shared. Steady
gettin money for her nails and her hair.

Pleasure and greed
took over her mind, makin her only think about
material things. Thus begining a whole saga of flings.........



Prostitute Flange Instrumental Featuring Trina - Lil Wayne
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Date Submitted: Nov 11, 2008 (08:45 PM)
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  Chinazy
12/08/08 (11:54 PM) 
phenomenal poem!!

  BlessedOne
12/08/08 (09:52 PM) 
You certainly can tell a good story. Its a sad one, and hopefully fiction, but it intriges me. All of the questions left unanswered make me look forward to the next episode.

  DeepThinker7
12/08/08 (08:42 PM) 
Interesting how you took this very sensitive topic and dived into it with such imagery and insight. Told a very detailed story that I am sure no one could have the courage to tell. Excellent work...like when people deal with real matters and express it with purpose. Look forward to the next installment

  StraY12
12/08/08 (08:37 PM) 
I did this too, I didn't do it this well tho', I stuck to the original concept since I was goin' thru the same thing, other then that You did your thing on this I'm feelin' the whole vibe to it, it's...escalated! keep writing!

  Addicted2Wrdz
12/08/08 (07:54 PM) 
yooooo!!!! i need to hear more. im mad that u left me in an extreme state of suspense, im trying to hear some more lol. good write!

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