Its not a haiku, but your words were magnetizing. Well done.

a haiku is 5 syllables 7 syllables 5 syllables, your message is great, just needs to be shortened.

i absolutely love this...its beautiful

*runs and grabs the dictionary* lol, I love when people challenge my mind, and in a haiku none the less, I mean isn't what this style is about?! Provoking thought and making people learn even when they don't wanna?! Lol. Oh yea I need that dictionary for real, ill be back to tell you what I learned! Lmao

"cries for the paradigm of sanity" tuff line right there... what is the paradigm? I guess my ish is unheard too ; ) nice.