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"Punchlines Please!!! The 6th Senseless"
  by D.O.X.
  - This Poem is a response to the poem [[ Punchlines Please-Plead the 5th Round]] by ...Da Fort...


I punchlines,
Drop lyrics,
Thoughts laid out
Spread across the canvas
(Cant brush it off)

Seeing stars,
A 10 count
As commentators
Try to analyze the madness
(With no method)

Showcased my talent
On the front page
Guess I had to
Pay per view
(Low credit score, high interest rate)

Many dismayed
At what was displayed
A few downplayed
But that’s what haters do
(They call that... showing love)

Actors & Actresses are plentiful,
Whether they
Front in the center
Or they hang backstage
(All Cons, No Artists)

They want to be heard
But they cast with no souls
Playing many roles
But cant act their age
(They excel in drama auditions though)

The pictures
That they cant paint lyrically
Are taken physically
So you get visuals, but no message
(No Delivery But Postage In Bulk)

I come here just for Kix
Tell me now...
Did the mother's approve
When the site was kid tested?
(I’m A Cereal Killer) LMAO
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Date Submitted: Jul 16, 2008 (07:02 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (2)
Date: 07/18/08 (03:44 PM)
Author: The Truf
Poem Title: Punchlines Indeed! (...

Date: 07/16/08 (01:20 PM)
Author: Ehren Giuly
Poem Title: Collabo- Terms

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comment icon  COMMENTS (16)
  K.A.S. THE LYR...
05/24/09 (08:32 PM) 
the start of excellence...very tight...like this the most.."The pictures That they cant paint lyrically Are taken physically So you get visuals, but no message (No Delivery But Postage In Bulk)"...so true....very nice

  leezymleezy
07/25/08 (10:19 PM) 
lol hell nah....this is crazy...lol...neva read a poem like this...i definitely gotta favorite this one

  Ordained2Chang...
07/24/08 (04:27 PM) 
So... the lyrical content in the piece was bananas, and from the title to the end, I was hypnotized. I truly loved it

  b3yond r3d3mpt...
07/23/08 (01:29 PM) 
okay tip da bmore fitted on dis one bruh

  The Truf
07/18/08 (03:37 PM) 
oh yeah. no diss to Fort, just...i like the rhythmic.

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