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"Quality Time"
A Datsexichick and Mz_Ndependent Collaboration


  Mz_Ndependent:

Can anyone hear me
i always feel as if im alone
Some times all i want is quality time
just some you and I
Some mother daughter
father son
Even in a relationship i wanna feel as if im the one
you want to spend your wakening moments with
the last person you see when you sleep
the person who holds you and bring you closure
man quality time is what will make relationships deep

  Datsexichick:

Time together means so much.
But we dont get a chance to do that and it really sucks.
i cant take it really i cant.
I have that feeling where i need to vent.
Alone in a dark room
just me by myself
thinking what if i change will that really help?
Naw i dont think so
hell maybe it would
get a little attention
oh ok maybe i should
how bout i yell and scream like i got no sense
do u think u would pay attention to me then?
All i want is some quality time.
Nobody else
Just u and i

  Mz_Ndependent:

But here's the thing you don;t understand
time spent with you
is gift... heaven sent
All i want is a hour or two
and to know you care
Hell say hello and treat me as if i'm here

But instead all i get
is a disappointed look
and time spent
alone by myself
which leads to tears
you don't know how it hurts
because your never there
As a growing girl.. Hell growing human being
all i need is quality time
allowing for you to see me

  Datsexichick:

See the hurt in mah heart is wat im tryn to disguise.
From the way i was treated.
No quality time needed.
So its hard to give it to someone else
even though i kno sometime it helps.
So with each passin moment i try my best.
To spend some time alone
away from the rest.
If it dont work charge it to the head.
Because i know i tried my best.
I know i did
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Date Submitted: Nov 29, 2008 (04:03 AM)
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  MR. BYRD
11/29/08 (09:36 AM) 
that's what's up ladies, ya did ya thang on this one....real talk, I love how ya'll mesh together in collabs...and in single poems as well, keep it up...B-Y

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