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"Rain Down….."
  by BlessedOne
  - This Poem is a response to the poem la la la, la, la la... by drybaggij





Seeing the emotions in your eyes

And hearing the thunder roar

I wanted to be the one that you adored

…(((((So)))))…

I closed my umbrella and looked to the sky

Allowing the love-drops to rain down

Drenching me in passion ever more

I need this love

…(((((So)))))…

I hope that it continues to pour




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Date Submitted: Aug 11, 2009 (09:40 AM)
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comment icon  COMMENTS (12)
  DREA23
08/13/09 (12:25 PM) 
oh mama this was beautiful its nothig like a love like this sweet

  ButterflyDream
08/11/09 (09:54 PM) 
wow....short and sweet,but so very deep.With those few lines this captivated me:)

  H.H. Holloway
08/11/09 (08:43 PM) 
Rain drops in the mood of romantic dew... Exquisite!

  after vision
08/11/09 (06:05 PM) 
this is a wonderful scribe and a even better picture painted my poet -- i hope love rains in your sleep

  RedLoveSong
08/11/09 (01:49 PM) 
Ya'll are teasing me with the rain today....I'm so in need of it. This was nice...let me go read what inspired this beautiful piece..

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