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"Rain"
  by Stargurl07*


I look outside my window
Thinking maybe if i look somewhere else
My pain will have dissapeared
But all i see are dark cloud not sunny skies

The rain beats down against the ground
I realize now, I want to run outside
And feel the cold wetness, on my bare skin
It starts to fall harder, I rush to the door

Outside, I stand letting the rain
Hit my hot body
Soaking wet, I just dont' care
My sorrows have dissapeared

The rain is like my tears
Washing away all anger and dispair
It frees my tortured soul
Helps me in my odd little way

Now the rain is dying down
I start walking back to the door
At the door I stop and turn around
To my surprise the rain left behind a gift
A beautiful, colorful rainbow

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Date Submitted: Aug 18, 2007 (12:23 AM)
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comment icon  COMMENTS (9)
  Big Ant
10/13/07 (06:35 PM) 
Im feelin dis one

  Poetry's Child
09/29/07 (09:27 PM) 
i like this alot.definitely a fav 10 starz

  Lucky#7
08/31/07 (10:29 PM) 
i like this.its beautiful.10 stars

  Fiasco
08/30/07 (08:21 PM) 
this is beautiful.Very visual. I like it.Your very talented. Keep it up 10 stars

  Poetic_Lyricis...
08/22/07 (09:05 AM) 
thats whats up...im liken that poem!!!!

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