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"Rain"
  by kell


Girl I know things have been crazy around here,
But I want you to know you have nothing to fear.
My ex means absolutely nothing to me now,
And I’m willing to do anything I can to prove that somehow.

Girl you make me smile when the world seems blue,
I don’t know how I could live in this world without you.
You make my day just by the way you smile,
Just to get the chance to hold you, I’d walk a million miles.

When you’re not here with me I go insane,
Because your love is as refreshing as spring time rain.
I want you to take your love and shower it all over me,
Because right here and now in my arms is where I want you to be.

Baby take your rain and drown me, I don’t need to breathe,
Cause I’m like a flower and I want you to come water me.
Your girls hate the fact that with me all your time is spent,
But when you around I wonder where all the time went.

Your good loving is exactly what I need,
And if you wondering if I have your back, yes indeed.
And you will never ever hear me complain,
Because I have been in a drought, and I need your rain.

You to good to be true, so I have to pinch myself,
Because this can’t be a dream, when you came, all nightmares left.
And if my ex ever comes back around here again.
Together we can take her down, cause you’re my lover and friend.

{NOTE: For those that have been reading my series of poems, this is still apart of the storyline, its just a lighter side of the story. And if you don’t know what I mean about the series, it all started with my poem, “Happy Without Me” and it has continued simultaneously including this poem. If you can, check it out, I know you’re going to enjoy it, Kell :)}
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Date Submitted: Jul 31, 2008 (05:53 AM)
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  Goldie
08/30/08 (06:40 PM) 
kell you know I ain't been on in a long time but man you still keep them poems moving you know they off the chain especially this one kekep it up man

  Nilla
08/14/08 (02:55 PM) 
this was sweet. utterly charming. and just simply pretty. and all that, i guess, makes up for a downright pretty lil' piece. *smiles* nicely done, hun.

  Jez
08/06/08 (07:32 PM) 
love the way you have decided to chill alittle. Nice work. I tell you what when you are hot mate you are hot

  A.C.H.
08/05/08 (10:33 PM) 
I'm feeling this poem. This is a beautifully written poem how espite all she put you through your feelings for her are oh so strong. This is a heart felt write. Keep doing you thing! - "the inspired one"

  me-me
08/05/08 (09:43 PM) 
awwwwwwwwwwwww this was so sweet

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