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"Rain on Window Panes.."
  by ndependent


let me just,

allow my eyes to imitate slumber

and


listen as your mind thinks out loud

without you having to say a word,

just,

feel the relaxation of your presence..


I really want to just,

dip my body into the pond of your extistence.

bathe in your inspiration.

outlining rings of your soul with my..



fingertips..


periodically tapping, to the rhythm of raindrops



kissing window panes


let's just,


lay here until tonight chases away


the gray skies of today..


I just,


want to wrap myself in the warmth of stability


disregarding the cold wet weather


lets sedate ourselves,


while natures soundtrack is being played..


let's learn how lips are suppose to kiss from


raindrops


kissing window panes


I am in love with days, like this..


I know you don't quite agree with labels,
I'm not really looking for a relationship..


but for the raindrops, lets label our relations, and let's just pretend.


that your finger is a pen,


leaving sketches of our names with your last name..


up and down, my back...like your scripted intentions are as real as my notepad..


just for today..


let my kisses mean a little bit more


as I steal them from your lips placing them on your heart..


where I intend to stay..


until


raindrops, fall out of love..


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Date Submitted: Oct 29, 2009 (12:28 AM)
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  Ordained2Chang...
11/19/09 (03:04 PM) 
*tries to hold back the tears*... This is what poetry is all about... Taking an emotion, a passion, a feeling, and turning it into depth. You truly took me to where you were in just a few lines... I thank you. Beauty does reside in and throughout this piece

  Guey2
11/14/09 (06:21 PM) 
Very very intimate peice of work.

  Monae'
11/14/09 (12:17 AM) 
Ooo this was sensual..beautiful...PeRfeCtly worded. I love your intention.

  ReliableLogic
11/10/09 (05:59 PM) 
Wow. I'll never look at raindrops the same way again. Beautifully written

  geel
11/01/09 (10:05 PM) 
so beautiful...and serene...this is a fav for me...and the background picture no words can be spoken it speaks for itself...thank u for sharing with me

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