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"Raparations"
  by AzIz
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Damaged by B. Rose


*Trying pleiades out for the first time...be EZ...lol*

Reparations

Recognizing pain I caused
Righting wrongs, hoping
Repenting pleas help in
Redeeming me, and you
Receiving my efforts in
Reinventing us and
Reuniting luv
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Date Submitted: Jul 26, 2008 (02:23 AM)
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  11th Wonduh
08/13/08 (03:07 PM) 
well, i always dig when writers go outside the box to be creative w/ expressing writes. and from the looks of this one, i see the gist of this is bout rebuilding love. the title made me think bout slavery, so i prepped for a poly-sci write. nonetheless, not bad for the first time out. continue perfecting

  Miss Poetry
08/01/08 (02:23 PM) 
Nice Response For It To Be A First. 10 Stars & Kep Up The Good Work.

  mark g
07/26/08 (01:01 PM) 
THIS IS HEARTFELT AND BEAUTIFUL

  Juicy1on1
07/26/08 (07:37 AM) 
I really did enjoy this as well haven't read B.Rose yet but this was hot. What is the concept of pleiades?

  B. Rose
07/26/08 (02:30 AM) 
That was a hot ass response yo... Im glad I could inspire you miss.... nice job for your first try seems you got it down...

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