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"Rare"
  by VeroniqaRoze


I'm beautiful in his eyes tonight
My smile is sweet
My eyes are bright
My lips are soft
My body's tight
He notices my breasts look ripe
Desire then sweeps over him
He wants to feel me deep within
He yearns to taste my silky skin
Secretly hoping that I'll give in
Before he ever touches me
He acts like he just wants to see
Inside my soul and set me free
As though we shall forever be
Tonight he makes me feel a new
I belive he really could be true
I believe his feelings truly grew
But it's only me he wants to do
His touch is soft
He seems so nice
He kisses me to break the ice
He scans my body over twice
It's time for me to pay his price
He's got me now
He's lured me in
Not thinking of my mortal sin
I give myself away to him
He always knew that he would win
Not it's over and it;s done
He got his wish
I made him cum
To him it was just good clean fun
He conquered me
He finally won
No longer am I beautiful
To him I'm used and worn
I leave his sight and only feel
So lost
So broke
Forlorn
He doesn't call
He doesn't care
He no longer feels he needs to stare
He's seen me whole, complete and bare
To him I am no longer rare
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Date Submitted: Aug 11, 2008 (05:16 PM)
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  Dare2Bme
09/21/08 (02:10 PM) 
There is so much I want to say about this, but just can't get the words right, other than the normal great, good, wow, etc. this really touches a woman to the core. and so damn true..

  mindbenda
09/02/08 (04:36 PM) 
damn girl you are a poet no doubt about it such realness in your words and emotion is the only thing to explain ur writes wow easy ten

  Hank
08/14/08 (08:50 PM) 
It's amazing how the poem starts off on such a high then tanks in the end...This was a heart felt piece...I certainly hope you adhere to that loser's philosophy that you are no longer rare cause it's not true!! Keep you head up Kid! It'll get better....

  XGMGrand
08/14/08 (03:29 AM) 
Def not what i was expecting when i first saw the title, so you def have the surprise factor. Loved the rhyme scheme and the flow of the piece and the topic is real. Great piece to showcase and a brilliant way to display the emotions and thoughts of both parties

  TRU-IN-DEED
08/13/08 (07:21 PM) 
Wow...this is something that occurs to good women day in and day out and its messed up but truthfully. While the majority of us men have intentions that are less than honorable with women, it is indeed up to ladies to be selective and clever enough to weed out the men who only want your umm....goodies lol. I would think that more often than not those chumps are easy to spot like for example if u just met the dude and for a first date he is tryin to get you to just come to his crib or he's tryin ...
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