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"Rated BLU:Butterfly"
  by Sigmatic


I want to dedicate this poem to my Rated BLU:Butterfly.
My ribbon in the sky; the apple of my eye.
She's the adverb that links my nouns and verbs.
The number one reason why I write spoken word.
I'll confess my love through pad and pen,
and maybe a relationship with us can begin.
If I caused any confusion I'll return to the start,
and piece this poem together part by part.

GOD was showing off when he made this creation.
He deserves a pat on the back, or a standing oviation.
She's the star of my dreams when I sleep at night.
When she walks by I let everyone know "Damn!!! She's Right"
Stunning and perfect for every occasion.
More complex than a quadratic equation.
So many things I wanna know, cause I still have questions.
Give me one more stanza to make the ultimate confession.

She's the Alize' in my cup that I love to drink.
The deepest Robert Frost poem that makes me take a moment to think.
So many dudes have broken her heart.
I'm not trying to be her whole world, just her favorite part.
No other girl has never made me feel the same.
Crazy thing about it I still don't know her line name.
Together we are truely fly.
With her I can kiss the sky.
Hoping one day to become her guy.
My AMAZINGLY AWESOME
Rated BLU:Butterfly.
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Date Submitted: Jul 31, 2007 (02:35 PM)
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  ShaNayia
11/29/08 (09:01 PM) 
Aww that is so freakin cute... I so adore this poem I think it has become one of my favorite... I love your word play it came off sincere and real... Great job poet... 10 starz and a fav

  Snickaz
11/26/08 (01:18 PM) 
AWWWW. THIS WAS A VERY SWEET POEM. SHES REAL LUKY CUZ A MAN WITH WERDS IS KINDA SEXY.LOL. BUT 4REAL THIS WAS A GUD WRITE. 10 4RM ME...

  Phirst Phoenix
11/15/08 (03:34 AM) 
If she feels for you anything similar to the emotions you have conveyed for her, then, Sweet Poet, love is bound to occur in one of its rarest forms: UNCONDITIONAL. Definite 10. Keep writing.

  Journey B
07/14/08 (04:14 PM) 
Damn she sounds alot like me... lol

  MilaP
06/24/08 (07:14 PM) 
Wow!!! who's the girl? lol! thats what GS is about you captured my mind and way of words! theres not enuff stars 4 diss 1!!!

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