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"re5pn5e"
  by ericsgurl
  - This Poem is a response to the poem playin games by spider


15t -n- 4mo5t mayb dat cHicK ge5t dunt no wat 5he want5 or maybe 5he ge5t u5in u- hate to break it 2 ya but u5 women cAn b really har5h @ time5 -n- 5umtime5 not meaning to-di5 aint really a peom-it5 ge5t a word of advicE5- take your time and do what you do be5t becAu5e -n- da end your going to be da one dat i5 happy -n- doin your thang-keep ya head up playa'5 dere alway5 a cHicK out dere 4 u-it may take more time- but aint it worth it? da perfecT per5on i5 out dere 4 all of u5 -n- if we ge5t wait -n- hav a lil patiencE it'll all work it5lef out-dunt wa5te your money on a cHicK DAT i5 4eva di5respecTn u- keep da money -n- do your 5hyt wen you want to do it-BUT if u want to wa5te your lyfe on a cHicK dat treat5 you lik 5hyt b ma gue5t-5umtime5 u5 "cHicK5" dunt no how to 5how our emotion5 or 5hare wat we really feeling 5o give her another cHancE-or let her go -n- if 5he cOme5 bacK 2 u den dat5 how you no 5he da 1 4 you-



****aint really a peom -n- it dunt really have a flow but maybe it'll help 5um1****
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Date Submitted: Sep 25, 2007 (01:26 PM)
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  <3Eric's Lil'M...
09/25/07 (01:36 PM) 
gurl wat da hell i5 wrong wit u? u u5ually have a good cHoicE w/word5-5eem5 lik u cOuldnt get out wat u wanted 2-lol but yea ma good wirte keep it up

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