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"~READ & PLEASE RESPOND~"
  by deja`vu


When someone sayz, "do you trust me?"
Do you really trust them?
I trusted a hot guy but I guess that's all he'll ever be,
I couldn't have a private conversation or write a little note to him,
because he alwayz told or showed his best bud what I said,
which really made me wanna unjure every part of his limbs,
The saddest part of this story iz,
he's my boyfriend,
and Im his Missez,
His kissed drive me crazy and Im confused about wat to do,
so everyone respond to this poem and help me out,
Because I'd really enjoy some advice from someone as special as you!
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Date Submitted: Mar 01, 2008 (10:59 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (4)
Date: 09/17/09 (07:08 PM)
Author: Flowet
Poem Title: A kiss worth forgetting

Date: 09/05/09 (01:31 PM)
Author: BigGuyMike
Poem Title: response

Date: 04/21/08 (05:52 PM)
Author: Dynasty Rose
Poem Title: mah reasponse to u

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comment icon  COMMENTS (9)
  Flowet
09/17/09 (07:10 PM) 
simply put read my response

  Tab Tab
06/27/08 (06:26 PM) 
He sounds young and really immature...i would say confront him and if you can find out why he's doing it, but that's only if you like him. If you only like his kisses then...no. Let go. And I don't believe in "Don't kiss and tell". Tell the whole world if you want to. Just make sure it sounds like a good thing and not a chain if you tell.

  Sum-Thyng Like...
04/21/08 (06:07 PM) 
don't kiss and tell that right there is against the rules stick to the script no add ur own shit dump him

  The Mad Poet
04/16/08 (06:12 PM) 
Well, from a guy perspective I wouldn't want a woman that kisses and tells...so I think u should let him know how u feel about him telling all yall personal and intimate business and see what he says...keep that pen moving and I hope my advice and the others advice helped your situation...*muahs*

  A.Renee
04/16/08 (06:02 PM) 
u gotta sau stop tellin ya guy everything we do. if he dont, dump his ass

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