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"real talk"
  by Night Crawler


i have send this piece to maura gale
Author of "Beyond Blessed" & "Anointed Agenda"
n ahd some very positive comments on this one but now i found this site n wanted to know what y'all think ...

Cadillac On 22s - David Banner

title : real talk
didn't really had a title for it so i just took this

This rite here .. damn this shit is real
some say it ain't a big deal ..
y'all don't know how they feel
it ain't bout me ..
it's 'bout an entire community
kids crying on the side walk ...
they saw an opportunity
the youth of today needs to pay attention in school to see ...
they need an education
N fight for what they want to be..
you dun want to be a thug ..
is it worth to get hit by a slug ...
you lucky to be alive
most gettin paralised for life ..
in some cases they praying
"please god .. can't you take away this pain ..
i'm ready to die die"
i'll never walk again with a girl by my side ...
if only i didn't go on a ride with my homeboys that night
everything turned black in front of my eyes
aint gone lie .. i was screamin for help
it ain't a dream .. can not discribe how i felt
make sure you don't know any drama
you got a family to take care off ...
N i mean you , tha baby N your baby momma
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Date Submitted: Jul 05, 2007 (07:26 AM)
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  NativeLady
10/18/09 (07:14 PM) 
true for many. i wish sum of my cousins wud quit der life style which is similar 2 dis. people just dont realize how important life is. its a gift but its up 2 you how 2 use it

  ButterflyDream
07/10/09 (08:24 PM) 
this is def a reality for many,nicely done

  Μz Ρ...
05/12/09 (06:21 PM) 
Scary write hun! But its the lives of some sadly .. great ink keep preaching what we need to hear xx

  ARCH ANGEL
05/07/09 (08:27 PM) 
i see ya on this bruh..looks like byrd put me up against u for the contest..this gone be a nice challenge u got some words behind ya..good luck bruh

  niKKi fetZ
04/13/09 (06:15 AM) 
wow this poem is intense it flows good and it def gets the point across - 10 starz

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