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"Reality Lost In The Moment"
  by Remy82


I try to hold back these tears that seem to be pushing it's way through
Hold back these tears as I lay right under you

Giveing me your "love" that you feel you hold withing your male principle
Oblivious to the fact that dealing with you has become more difficult

Kissing me on my neck and carressing me on my breast
The passion makes my heat rise, but I still hurt within my chest

You want to release your potion that you body always makes
You want to release this potion that you feel will make this anger go away

In my mind my thoughts jump from place to place
Thinking about this ecstasy feeling that you're giving and also when you spit in my face

"What's my name" Those are the words that you whisper in my ear
As if that fight we just had just all of sudden dissappeared

I'm still fed up and I still feel the way I expressed myself in that conversation
Now you feel that a little sexual encounter will be your way of persuasion

No soft spoken apologies to make me feel at ease
Just a soft stroke of your tongue as you go between my knees

Frustration pure's from my body yet my heart still needs attention
But you climb off lay on your side and what just happened is never again mentioned.
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Date Submitted: Aug 17, 2009 (11:43 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 09/02/09 (05:36 PM)
Author: briscoe
Poem Title: FORGIVE my Hidden Em...

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  s0uth3rn g1rl
09/16/09 (04:57 PM) 
really feeling this joint ma, you can def feel the emotion you put in this write, sex can't cure no problem and it's sad that some men think if they make you feel good on the inside that you forget what's really going on!! nice write!!

  TANENE
09/03/09 (07:06 PM) 
Yo this was really deep....something every girl could relate to...good write! keep pushin that pen ur talented!

  KINGLO
09/03/09 (05:16 PM) 
very raw im like n this be cuz u spoke yo mind on this piece very hot

  MR. BYRD
09/02/09 (06:47 PM) 
Dang Remy....full of deep emotion "frustration pure's from my body yet my heart still need attention, But you climb off lay on your side and what just happened is never again mentioned" I seen that scenario sooooo many times ya dig....continue to push that pen

  briscoe
09/02/09 (03:06 PM) 
uh.....yea.... that was some serious ink yo!.. the typical man... haha

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