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"rediscover/remember"
  by lil'bitt


i heard a knock at the door so i went to go open it of course
to see you standing there in front of me and you said with a voice that was hoarse
"come back to me my love
and rediscover
everything that we had between each other"
so i let you in not knowing what to expect
but the anxiety inside me was rising
because i wanted to kno what would happen next
soon our passion filled the room
and you made me feel like i was in space on the moon
as you caressed my body with a gentle hand
telling me that you would always be there to understand
kissing my lips softly and lovingly
you placed tender kisses on my neck
making me feel like i was your one and only
even at the crack of dawn
our love making session continued on
my body quivered with delight
as the sun filled the sky with its beautiful light
our cries of pleasure filled the morning air
while we rediscovered each others touch
you showed me how much u still care
as we ended i laid my head upon your chest listening to your heart beat
but i knew that tonight was the last time
u and i would meet
see even though we wanted to lay there and reminesce together
my husband would be back soon and you couldn't keep your wife
waiting at home forever.
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Date Submitted: Sep 01, 2007 (05:45 PM)
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  PoeticSoulja
11/06/07 (08:25 PM) 
Whoa that was real wild.I wasn't expecting yall to be married.Thats a great plot twist for real and then it rhymed to.You already know this is going on the favorites.I am going to favor you as a poet :) You get ten stars this one.Simply amazing mami

  Cudjoe
09/08/07 (08:36 PM) 
this caught my attention damm it is hot gurl u did ya thing and u got me going ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

  datgurllele
09/02/07 (11:21 PM) 
I love the suprise at the end!! I wasn't expecting that...this was hot, cute, and funny at the same time!! 10 strz

  rsenio
09/02/07 (11:06 PM) 
Say that was cool, but fucked up. i woulda neva expected it to end like that. I like that it's real original, neva heard anybody talk about cheatin that way, you got yo own style on this, ten stars.

  daLadiez mann
09/02/07 (08:24 PM) 
o shit.lol.your crazy, lol. i liked this one too. It was funny, lol. Good ending.

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