GS Poetry Home
Home
GS Blog
Media
Events
      Poems      Poets      Submit Poems      Collaboetry      SoulCasts     


 
GS Poetry
 
     
           

Your Ad Here

   
  arrow Amayzn's PREVIOUS POEM Amayzn's NEXT POEM arrow  
     
     
  
"Reflections"
  by Amayzn
listen to soulcast


Excuse me.....
I'm not used to doing this....
but something about you took my mind
and made my heart flutter like dove's wings
and I just had to ask you,
Is your soul as beautiful as your eyes?
See, when I first laid my oculars upon you,
I felt as if I had already knew you,
like an unwritten prophecy had come true;
you made me feel pure.
It's making melt inside just how you look at me
cause this emotion is good..and...wondorous...yet new.
I love it, which brings me back to my question;
Is your soul as beautiful as your eyes?
A wise woman once told beauty is only skin deep
but it's the heart and soul that makes us yearn to be "we"
and I'd like to start what we could have off correctly
with a bit of open honesty.
like, may I ask how long you've been on this journey of love
so I can walk with you and share the last of the miles?
Or what are the thousand things that make you sad
so I can come up with a thousand and one things to make you smile?
Can I be the provider of joy who's given your heart
and swear we'd never be apart
so long as I kept lonliness away from your door?
I see us making a love deeper than sexual penetrations
closer than parent and child relations
sweet and deep like the gold in honey
but better than a paycheck and money.
I wanna be yours; will you be mine?
That's what I'd love to ask your mind
before I peer into the coffee brown of your retnas
through the shine of pearls
to the place where God placed your spirit
see how bad men didn't ruin you
..but made you a better you.
Most of all, I wanna know how much you love HIM
so I can be the one holding your hand
as we walk through the gates
peering over generations and nations
bore from our love
rested on a cloud above still oceans and blue winds
cause miss,
you are my soul's counterpoint
and it would be my pleasure to dissappoint
anyone who told you
you wouldn't find someone better than them
just tell me:
Is your soul as beautiful as your eyes?
© 2000-2009 GS Poetry. All rights reserved.
search icon
Date Submitted: May 11, 2009 (11:49 PM)
search icon
Viewed: 101  times
user icon
Poem Favorited By: 3 Members
send the poem to friend
   
     
lock Log in to add this poem to your favorites.



comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (0)

No poem responses yet. Click here to be the first!!

 


comment icon  COMMENTS (11)
  Untouched_Soul
06/18/09 (02:04 PM) 
"See, when I first laid my oculars upon you, I felt as if I had already knew you, like an unwritten prophecy had come true;you made me feel pure"... "sweet and deep like the gold in honey " As I siad I love this side of your pen I can feel the serenity in your words

  Planted Daisie...
06/07/09 (03:43 PM) 
definitely a hot piece...10 * and fave

  Jj
05/14/09 (07:15 PM) 
Damn, wow. The last line took it away for me. 10

  Athena317
05/13/09 (11:11 AM) 
see how bad men didn't ruin you ..but made you a better you. Fav line right there... Ilove to see it when experience gives way to knowledge and strength!

  Μz Ρ...
05/13/09 (05:35 AM) 
It sure is..lol nice write ..really beautifull words and wordplay is on point xx

Page(s): 1  2  3 
lock Log In to comment on this poem.
     
     
  arrow Amayzn's PREVIOUS POEM Amayzn's NEXT POEM arrow  



 
Site Links
About GS Poetry
FAQs
Testimonials
GS Gold Membership
Links
Copyright Information
Contact Us
 
Site Features
Buy Credits
Promote GS
Events
Collaboetry
Soulcast
Poet Search
RSS icon RSS Feeds
 
GSoul Baby-Tees
GSoul Baby-Tees
Support GS and urban poetry by purchasing an official GSoul Baby-Tee. Order Now!
 
Donate
Help GS continue its efforts to maintain a creative and supportive poetry site. Any amount is welcomed and appreciated.
 



© GS Poetry 2000-2008.  All rights reserved. Terms of Use | Privacy