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"ReGift:Love"
  by *~§Poetic§~*


The gift i wanted to give you
I couldn't buy from the store
I told myself that.....
Repeatly that i gave this gift before

But i kept asking myself
were you man enough
to recieve it

I guess i wrong
cause as you walked
I watched you leave it

The gift was my love
why couldn't you keep it
why couldn't you love me....
Make me happy like you once did...

Shit i hate it
Giving my love only to recieve
Hurt in return

Where's the dayum reciept
You can take that shit back to the store
I don't want it anymore

Fuck this regifting shit
I'm keeping this one
cause niggas like you
just made sense of it....

Goodbyes - Kelis
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Date Submitted: Dec 31, 2008 (12:24 AM)
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  big josh
11/18/09 (09:31 AM) 
yet again you wrote another wonderful piece. you got skills no doubt and you shouldn't put your pen down for anyone. hot drop :)

  DeepThinker7
07/04/09 (03:12 AM) 
Intresting structure you used to tell this complex emotion; good use of metaphors. Well done and keep moving your mental ink forward!

  NICKY BOO
06/17/09 (12:17 PM) 
i love this ma...this is so freakin relatable...love can be so cruel sometimes im tellin u....u love ur hardest, and in return they give unappreciation...nice drop here

  Short
03/12/09 (02:05 PM) 
girl you penned the tail on the donky with this one write here... It's a very nice write keep up the good work.... Much Luv!!!

  lussa
02/15/09 (03:23 PM) 
that was hot lol so so tru loved it :)

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