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"ReGift:Love"
by *~§Poetic§~*
The gift i wanted to give you
I couldn't buy from the store
I told myself that.....
Repeatly that i gave this gift before
But i kept asking myself
were you man enough
to recieve it
I guess i wrong
cause as you walked
I watched you leave it
The gift was my love
why couldn't you keep it
why couldn't you love me....
Make me happy like you once did...
Shit i hate it
Giving my love only to recieve
Hurt in return
Where's the dayum reciept
You can take that shit back to the store
I don't want it anymore
Fuck this regifting shit
I'm keeping this one
cause niggas like you
just made sense of it....
Goodbyes - Kelis
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Dec 31, 2008 (12:24 AM)
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COMMENTS (18)
big josh
11/18/09 (09:31 AM)
yet again you wrote another wonderful piece. you got skills no doubt and you shouldn't put your pen down for anyone. hot drop :)
DeepThinker7
07/04/09 (03:12 AM)
Intresting structure you used to tell this complex emotion; good use of metaphors. Well done and keep moving your mental ink forward!
NICKY BOO
06/17/09 (12:17 PM)
i love this ma...this is so freakin relatable...love can be so cruel sometimes im tellin u....u love ur hardest, and in return they give unappreciation...nice drop here
Short
03/12/09 (02:05 PM)
girl you penned the tail on the donky with this one write here... It's a very nice write keep up the good work.... Much Luv!!!
lussa
02/15/09 (03:23 PM)
that was hot lol so so tru loved it :)
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