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"Relaxing With You"
  by icnicn2004


Relaxing With You
July 14, 2009

I love relaxing with you

Lying on the bed with my head on your chest

The sound of your heartbeat is music to my ears…

It’s comforting as I slowly fall asleep

Your muscular arms wrapped around me in a bear hug type way…

It makes me forget about my problems…even if only for a couple of hours…

I love it when you lay your head in my lap and I run my fingers through your hair…

10 to 20 minutes go by and I hear your soft snore…

Our laughing sessions...

We laugh until our stomach muscles hurt…

Pillow fights in the middle of the night…

I love the carefree moments that we share

Because

Relaxing with you

Is one of my favorite things to do

Written by: icnicn2004
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Date Submitted: Jul 14, 2009 (11:39 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 07/14/09 (10:43 PM)
Author: Dr. Who
Poem Title: The Sublime Path

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  Dream Weaver
08/01/09 (09:16 AM) 
This is a very loving poem. I love the innocence and purity that drips from the page. This is something along the lines that I would write about. The simplicity of intimacy... it's a beautiful thing.

  Lips
07/22/09 (08:08 PM) 
I enjoyed this piece because even though there wasn't any rhyming it flowed so well. anybody can use rhymes in there piece but to not use any that shows unique talent in my opinion, anyways great write, continue blessing us with your words...

  Shani. Medicin...
07/16/09 (08:40 PM) 
Yes, nothing like relaxing with people we care about and also people or loved ones that allow us to relax and chill for a minute. Thanks for sharing.

  Poetic Lyricis...
07/15/09 (03:13 PM) 
That was so sweet and warming--nothing like relaxing in your loved one arms and I found my self giggling at the pillow fight part LOL---10stars

  cocoadiva
07/14/09 (03:35 PM) 
awe... i would love to relax like that as welll.. lol.. great write.. 10 starz

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