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"RELEASE"
  by AmateurNoMore


Darkness, tension, anticipation, sensual temptation
Turn my head towards moving air, just missing the scent of...?
Caressed gently over there, teasing the sensations of lost emotions
The fire of his touch feathering my skin, melting inwards towards endless smolder,
awaiting and rising to accept absolute solitude with him
Oblivious to the immediate attention of him within my soul

My limbs intertwined with him to distinguish his growth

Perpetuating the likeness of two in the valley of sensations, vibrations, and stimulations
Exploring exotic places as he indulges in his isle of running waters,
until the folds of the waves crash against my flesh
The bend in my body so unnatural it causes insertion
Connection confirmed, forces aligned
disseminating into the depths
of divine intervention
of two, so unto then
is the power to
RELEASE
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Date Submitted: Jun 25, 2009 (05:10 PM)
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  Cornfed
08/01/09 (11:23 PM) 
You have inked a very expressive well thought out pen! Set the scene without graphic baggage! Very cleaver indeed!10

  TheUltimateCur...
07/03/09 (09:49 PM) 
I love these erotics that let you envision whats happening instead of being graphic... well done

  A.C.H.
06/26/09 (10:45 AM) 
I liked the symbolism in this piece. It was not too graphic but gave way for the reader to "fill in the blanks" I like see writes like this. I am definitely feeling this. Much luv on this piece! - "the inspired one"

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