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"RELIEF"
  by DSD
  - This Poem is a response to the poem pain by *Prince Scott*


Thank god its a relief
the pain that was once here
its gone no more tears
i dont feel like i killed anyone
the pain has lifted no more gun
rain that fell and touched my veins
it fell once more but reliefed my pain
im happy again but they think im insane
the light has been brought to me
i opened my eyes now i see
its a relief that pain has left me
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Date Submitted: Sep 18, 2007 (04:50 PM)
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  Ms. Hollywood
09/26/07 (03:31 PM) 
this was short.. but i think you captured the point at hand... the pain is officially gone... whatever you were goin through is strictly in the past.. which is good.. you overcame... kudos

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