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"REMARKABLE"
  by mz.i-20


remarkable isnt it

how a smiple kiss made my day
how your love made my heart sing
how i sit by my phone waiting for you ring

than you call my heart skips a beat
i cant feel my feet
and i cant beleive you love me

remarkable isnt it

this paper cant hold my heart
this pencil isnt as fast as each beat
but then , your love kept my trust

and its difficult were far apart ,
and there no more us
just you, me , never meant to be,

remarkable isnt it

how i still have love for you
how i cant help but think of you
your kiss

your lips
how before you left we usta sit and remenice
and i cant help but think its just

REMARKALBE...
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Date Submitted: Nov 21, 2007 (01:11 PM)
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  Black Cyrano
08/10/09 (10:20 PM) 
Sweet. You can almost see how you're feeling.

  nneely2011
08/10/09 (04:58 PM) 
wow..thats so beautiful for real. it is remarkable when something seems as though it will last forever and all of a sudden everything is gone its sad to see and sad to feel it the hurt the pain that comes with love is horrible.im sorry it didnt work out. but this is a great poem :) ten stars

  Kid Cky
08/09/09 (02:52 PM) 
I like it, I think it's full of imagery and meaning. And the repetition of "remarkable isn't it", is appropriate. But you lost me on when the poem reads, "and there no more us, just you, me, never meant to be". Other than that great poem. "This pencil isn't as fast as each beat", GREAT LINE!

  #1
08/09/09 (03:33 AM) 
I'm actually goin through this particular situation. Ur style is dope, jus clean it up a bit. U got talent, keep writin

  MiSTAKEN101
08/09/09 (01:40 AM) 
I LOVE IT..YES SOME THINGS ARE JUST REMARKABLE NICE FLOW KEPP EM COMING

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